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Knight wields swords and armor with a balance of offense and defense and usually has some kind of leadership skills and horse riding skills as well. Warriors focus a lot of offense typically brute force have no leadership in most cases and have no general specialization of skills. Like a bandit...

Tiger(Big cats(Jaguars etc.)), snake, spider, mosquito, crane, turtle (it even sounds like a sh***y JP 'I Was isekai'd with my pet turtle'). These animals are VERY common but none are frequently in fantasy novels. Imagine your character needs progress as he was being a D*** or was thinking the...

First off no mafia organization is going to throw a SUPRISE birthday party, at most they are going to throw a banquet for knowledge on who is on what side and respect. Second a mafia don won't just follow a subordinate he has other people to do that.

I honestly think Everyone Else Is A Returnee is a very good one. No super harem, a decent development actual romantic progression and no beta mc. The story is also very well put together.

First my impression is that tre diagram.... completely ruins the story it's way to complicated and restraining it should only go 1 way in influence not all ways at the same time. 2 the base classes need to be more general and not DPS or whatever in needs to a bit more concrete in idea, are the...

I think the only viable answer is druid 1 monster tamer? How to tame? It's not like it's a 100% guarantee that you would tame them(whatever they are) and a slime? How would it being you food? Water? 2 tunneling? It's out from the start why? Because in the description it says touching is...

Everybody else saying swords, spears or scythe and I'm here with my favorite being gauntlets (heavy armor gloves included) or maybe a mace I love the brute force and simple weilding style I'm not very coordinated so it speaks to me. I also like rapiers most pleasing to the eye.

I think it comes down to the time you were in this relationship with them, if they were living with you, and can they get the money easily etc. etc.

I don't have anything interesting to add but if your writing about orcs, your required by a nonexistent law to have a 'KUHH KILL ME' female knight in your story.

Be bold, try a new haircut, try new clothes, ask that one girl/guy out that you couldnt before you never know right? Do new things, don't sit at home those things will become memories and experience you'll find yourself more friends and life more fun. And most importantly don't be stupid, being...

For a good romance -no harem (Romances between multiple people aren't really believable. The amount of harems that would be okay are verrryy small, and it takes time to flesh them out time most don't use.) -no early romance (Saying you love this person two days after meeting this other person...

There was an extensive war with extraterrestrial life forms and after a grueling amount of time, was lost. Taken over by these aliens we were studied. To find out about this human emotion called love, which had given them massive pains during the war, they used the humans own creations otome...

If you go to your profile(small blip) on the main site scroll down to release filtering, it'll take you to a page where you can exclude genres, there you can block fantasy and search for yourself from there. Personally I like a lot of ideas on this site but I feel so many lack delivery, a gap...

Lavender is my favorite. The most recognizable for me is pinesole or bleach.

The only time to listen to readers are if they have ACTUAL relative advice. Like explaining a plot hole you have, or maybe bringing something to attention such a character's out of well, character reaction or such. Listening to readers is not something you should do in relation to story...

Citadel: wide area defense allies/area takes no damage (massive stamina use) Aegis: invulnerability for 3~5 sec( cannot move) Block: massively reduced damage to shielded areas Cover: move to instantly cover an ally, take reduced damage

There's also the writers feedback that may dissuade them even more from writing/continuing.

With this problem you could have the main character be a major tilt factor to the war, have the other side suffer a loss or two but going forward have a major returning enemy and have mc tied up away from affecting the war and you can finally have your mc give a fitting end to the enemy. This...

Maybe set a story line before hand? And what you need to get there? Add more jokes, descriptions, go more in depth about things conversation as well after that that's the most I can come up with as a reader. Other than that...maybe your story isn't clicking that much with you? Or read others...

Not to alarm you (but I think) yours may or may not be severely broken.