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I only read the first chapter, but it's a really, really great start! You got a solid hold of your characters right off the bat, and I could paint a clear picture of all of them, which only made me want to learn more of them. Keep it up! I do hope you are posting this story elsewhere beyond...

It is a bit hard to follow sometimes. For instance; 'Another fist lands into his other eyes. 'I land another fist in his eye,' would be better. Other than that, it's alright.

Yes. When you meet someone, you don't instantly know who they are. It would be the same as how your readers view your characters.

Because they are a finished story. No waiting for updates. Everything can be read in one sitting.

Reading FF is super helpful. You can see the many ways in which a certain character might act depending on the situation they are in. It gives you great insight. But the easiest way to make a character more 'real' is to simply treat them like they are real. How would they respond to certain...

Really good advice. I second everything.

This is so freaking hilarious. Lol.

1. Writing in past tense when it should be present. 2. Writing in present tense when it should be past tense. 3. Repeating the same word more than three times in a paragraph (Pet Peeve). 4. Procrastinating when I should be writing (Cough...doing it right now...) 5. Starting other stories when...

Awesome to see someone ask the question I was just thinking about! I really need to go back and re-write a few chapters. The only problem is it will likely interrupt my weekly update schedule...

Yeah, the iseka genre has more than its share of bad eggs, but honestly, you will find that is the case in all genres and tropes. In the end, practice makes perfect, and you have to start somewhere. Along the way, you learn from your mistakes and slowly get better. Some people are just naturally...

I once tried to horde my chapters, but I'm way too impatient and need to shove it out so I can move onto the next! I also stare like a fool at my screen for hours after I post a chapter, perking up at every little number that changes on my statistics. Haah, it is a really bad habit. Also, the...

I understand what you mean because I am like that also. 90% of my ideas never see the day of light because they are constantly changing at the drop of a hat, and I play around with different scenarios of the same idea a lot, as well. First thing, if the idea fades and doesn't pop up again in a...