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    Feedback is needed? harsh critic is what I need now

    I took a look. I didn't take away the no sound thing. It seemed like there was, I mean, there was a language used, which I thought you did a great job with. I had questions. I left a few in the comments. I want to understand more before leaving a review. I experimented with a story of a city...
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    Requesting Feedback: Gender-Bender Fantasy Series – Think D/S Meets Magical Dystopian Bureaucracy

    Hey folks, I’d love some feedback or reviews on my story “Cameron to Candy.” It’s a gender-bender fantasy where D/S culture isn’t just tradition, it’s enforced by magical law, bureaucratic oversight, and performance-based curtsey and spanking mandates. Think: “What if a dominatrix, a...
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