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And a succubus summoning circle on the inside case for yours.

Oh, gnomes. I thought you said G-NOME for a bit and I got excited :cry: Gnomes are interesting, too I suppose. Edit: It appears to be up. Even if the idea's weird it's all up to the execution in the end, you know? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/464355/i-want-to-paint--a-gnomes-tale/

This is so true. If I hadn't already gotten a taste for coffee, and didn't like how it smells I wouldn't tolerate the stuff even if it can get me WIRED when I to be. Oftentimes people drink to get hammered as an escape or a "motivator" and that's reason enough for them to eat the cost to their...

Left you a comment on your first chapter, I think you did pretty good, all things considered. Ashla's predicament is interesting and those code monsters were suitably terrifying to imagine. I'd say one or two minor editing passes would bring it up to the level of what makes the trending list...

Go for the "girly drinks" and screw everyone who calls you out for not flagellating your pallet with stuff made for "real men": mudslides, margaritas, grasshoppers, anything with ice-cream and mint and stuff that also incorporates a base with 35% alc/vol or higher for faster effects with less...

A novelized version of gameplay and story intergration, at least in works where characters are aware of the RPG aspects. How does the game system effect society and the characters? Their culture? Their lifestyles? A lot of authors just spam windows and go on and on about cool abilities without...

Both are good, but I really want a floofy waifu to tell me everything is going to be okay.

Oh, true true, I was aiming at more of a "practical experience" thing than a "kill some mobs to level up" thing, but that is how a lot of litRPGs work, kinda defeats the purpose of having academic institutions when the best way to get a bigger fireball is to kill things with your small fireball...

9mm may not be enough, gotta follow up with a flamethrower then some form of planar banishment to make sure they don't come back and their souls can't empower the MC. Even if you know a little necromancy, I'd recomend that you not turn them into undead thralls, it may work in the short term...

Pst, make a link in your siggy, or at least this post, for easier access. I'll give it a look.

This is true in many respects, but there's several realistic ways to get your smol witch in a room with a bunch of axe wielding meatheads. An arcane institution can be tied to government forces, either as field experts or living artillery pieces who could contract guild members for cheap on the...

Don't make it a crutch, it can get you loosy goosey when you have writer's block, but you still have to should still edit your stuff later. If you make it a habit, that lizard brain part of us that likes to make associations feel like the word of God can make it feel like you must drink to write...

They're very practical for a working society, in instances where they're not outright called adventurer's guilds in-story (and indeed in the real world) they're just surveyors, investigators, mercenaries, hitmen, and "private security" (read, hired thugs) that can be part of a company or solo...

I see, I see. I'll still be posting my impressions, whether you find them useful or not. Giving crit sharpens my own blade as much as it sharpens that of the people I interact with, my efforts aren't entirely selfless.

Took me forever and a day, but I've posted my initial impressions as a comment. The amount of time I had to spend on the basic mechanical stuff was thin, which is always a treat, I could focus more on style/actual story stuff.

Magitec Beat the heart of Sabik! The heart of Sabik! The heart of Sabik!

Sorry I took so long, Indigo and Psy pretty much said everything I wanted to say about the synopsis, but I've left you a comment on your first chapter regarding the story itself, I honestly think you're onto something here, it just needs polish and perhaps a beta or two! If you feel so...

You're a good mum.

Ooooh, like a human spliced with alien/magical monster genes to give her powers either through some kind of Clarke Tech either in the womb or as a surgery for an already developed person XCOM "meld" style? Sounds interesting either way. What kind of setup did you have in mind? This opens up a...