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All of what you said, I already know. The example I posted is not how I write my dialogue. It's just an EXAMPLE to show that you don't have to always use dialogue tags... Also, I do not get what your point is in saying that it's not a question of whether the book is printed or not. That's not...

I never said that I hated the review. There are very good points in the review that I will use to improve my writing. What makes it haughty is the ending where they say "...and my personal favorite "Unexperienced" which isn't even a word (should be inexperienced)" The addition of the 'my...

Good idea! I'll do that! Thanks!

It's cool.

No, I don't have an issue with the whole pointing out my typos, that's a help. I didn't mean to make it seem like I didn't want people to point out my typos, but now that the review is up and edit my story, which I am going to do because I've gotten some good contructive critism, that review...

Eeeehhhh...a bit of both? Nothing wrong with that. Ummm....not everybody knows that sweety...not everybody know the same thing. There are no absolutes. If you already know, then keep scrolling by, obviously I'm not directing this at people who already know. Yea, I know it can happen between...

Yup,

I wonder if people still read printed books. In printed books when characters are talking, you do not always have to keep using dialogue tags especially if it's just two people talking. You know who is talking because the earlier dialogue tags sets the pattern showing the flow of conversation...

Thanks! Hey, I've seen you on RR! Hehe Got ya.

I just love getting a review where people clearly don't know what they are talking about. Everybody makes typos in writing, no one is perfect. Obviously I have more editing to do, which is normal since hey, we're all human. My favorite one though is telling me that it's not unexperienced but...

Ok, for instance, instead of the guy flat out saying that the synopsis was boring, he could have said something like: A little advice, the synopsis isn't really grabbing me. Perhaps try to reword it differently to grab a reader. Then I would have asked for advice on how to reword the synopsis...

Thank you very much! Now that is constructive critism! I appreciate you taking time to help me. Honestly, I found it hard to read your example synopsis because it felt kind of stiff without flow. However, I will take it into concideration and I really appreciate how polite you were. Also, the...

I actually do change up my dialog tags when they match the characters personality. If you think the story is boring then that's your opinion. What is boring to you isn't boring to someone else. I don't care if it's Royal Road or Scribble Hub. I don't respond bad to criticism. I get criticism all...

I'm sorry but I don't write rehashed already been done to death stuff. If you don't like the story, then move on. I'm not changing my story plot or character names for anyone. It's funny you say readers are feeling alienated when I got a five star rating after I posted the story lol. Whatever...

If you don't know the difference between constructive critism and being rude then I can't help you. Being rude while giving critism doesn't help anyone. Learn the difference.

What I don't want is rude feedback. Now this is all I will say. I'm not going to keep going back and forth with you. I'm done with this conversation.

Thanks, I added the link to my original post. I didn't say you were talking about genres but the point is, everybody thinks something is boring to them. We all have different tastes. If you think it's boring then don't read it. Move along. I don't see your point in saying that it's boring. I...

Do you have signatures turned off because I see it clearly. Then don't read it. lol I mean, I think all of that isekai stuff is boring...

It's down there where it says check out my story. The words that are blue are the links...

Thanks, I'll just keep my link like i have. That's simpler.