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Depends on the type of headache as others have said, but when I had really bad migraines I would see little sparkleys with my eyes closed.

Don’t wrap up their business. Leave them unfulfilled as far as their story arcs. For example, when they are introduced give them a motivation like they want to take revenge on this person or group who is nowhere around. People would think Chekov’s gun, that you mentioned that revenge because it...

There is no such thing as permanent allies and permanent enemies, only permanent interests.

I do not like dialogue that is just a series of quoted strings back and forth with no prose telling me who is saying what. I think it is cheap and confusing, especially if more than two people are talking. But that is just my opinion. I always write in a way that if there was just someone...

Doesn't really matter what you choose, just be consistent in your own internal rules. For example, you could have Skills be learnable skills such as those you mentioned Backstab, etc. Abilities could be something ingrained into a person, for example instead of [Mana manipulation] being an...

Well, here is the thing. When we write romance in fiction -- just throw your own experience with romance in reality out the window, mostly. People don't want to hear so much about the regular romance of everyday people ("We went to see a movie then snogged for a while"). People want...

Thanks for the feedback.

Sure, I'd love some feedback. It's an xianxia story, so forgive the unusual terms if you're not used to or a fan of this type of story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/372089/the-three-lives-of-the-fallen-immortal/