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    Need writing advice.

    Well, well, well. We meet again. I'm going to assume you're familiar with the idea of creating fake scenarios—this is how I came up with my story. At the time, I was reading *Berserk* for the second time:sweat_smile: and had just watched the *Cyberpunk* anime:blob_whistle:. I thought it would be...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Yuin, you always make my day, man. And thank you for finally doing my story, I really appreciate your feedback. While I wrote the 6th chapter about two weeks ago, I now use italics for internal monologue and have improved in some areas. Thanks, but don't think you'll get away — I am coming at...
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    Writer’s Block Café

    Sorry for asking, can you share the image that made you write this
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    Writer’s Block Café

    Hi, I'm an author suffering from writer's block. -sounds similar to yourself, then this thread is for you. - Here you can write whatever you want, a scene that you wanted to write, or a writing prompt for others, or just chill and tell about yourself, like hobbies, talents, why you started...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Of course, you are. And I'm the vip member. :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
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    Power Creep

    Maybe you should give a bigggg setback to your power like with Nen (from Hunter × Hunter). The power system is complex, but there is a concept in every power or type of Nen: that power isn't a gift; everything has a cost. If your character is using a technique or power that is overpowered, like...
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    Yo, I'm going to read your story. It'll really doesn't matter to you, but I would love to do a...

    Yo, I'm going to read your story. It'll really doesn't matter to you, but I would love to do a proper feedback.?
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hey, brother. Please do mine next, if you can. "There is no pressure." But you said the most active member will get the feedback. So after "nya-chan" (Assurbanipal_II), I'm next.? And... it is a zero draft, so don't be too hard? on it.
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Why does that even matter? It's not like Yuin's feedback enlightens you. Try new things, it'll help you as a writer in the future. But well, if you don't want, then it's okay. bye my friend.
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    bruh, private message me, and pls talk English. tnks
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hey, if you want, we can swap feedback on our stories. If you are interested, pm me. (because this thread is not ours?.)
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    0................................................. This thread was made by mistake.
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    Description questions for everyone

    Hmm, let's see. **Q1**: In terms of explaining how the various genres operate, it's worth keeping in mind that a romance novel does have certain expectations that are different from others, such as action-adventure. In romance, readers tend to want awkward and clean interactions instead of...
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    Daily Writing Process Tips/Tricks?

    This is the type of thread I like. I don't think I'll ever have a routine. It's okay if you do, but for me, writing is about getting better at English and explaining things clearer—so I don't think I'll ever have a set routine. Also, you said that you're a full-time newbie writer. I used to...
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    Philosophy, psychology, and themes in writing. What is your story trying to say?

    Ay, howdy we meet again, though. different site :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
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    How to overcome writer’s block?

    Somehow, you always help me. :ROFLMAO: And I already read it. Well, thank you.
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    What is the oldest game you have downloaded but still haven't played?

    Blasphemous, I guess. And Elden Ring :blob_cookie:
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    Philosophy, psychology, and themes in writing. What is your story trying to say?

    Hi! You can probably guess from the title that I've asked a deep question: What is your story saying, or what do you want to say with your story? I love this kind of question, especially since I'm a huge fan of "Attack on Titan." The show deals with serious themes such as humanity, sacrifice...
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    How do you write fighting scenes?

    Why will I hate you? I don't understand, but okay!!! ? (y) And, thanks again(u really made thank you for like 10 different times).:ROFLMAO:
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Of course, I have to worry... my feedback is still due, you know.(jk) :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
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