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  1. SuperHeiyan

    Where's the line for AU and other works inspired stories drawn.

    Good question, because the answer is in the name itself. AU can't be not tied to original story. Personally I don't like Alternative Universes in most cases since they are mostly just reusing your own or someone else characters to not make a new ones. But there are cases of "done right" where...
  2. SuperHeiyan

    One reason out of the many on why cats are better

    Actual experience suggest that they most likely will simple munch of several families because this days there is always someone willing to feed one. And cats that like to hint kill much more than needed to eat anyway, of course it is still possible to overfed the cat to the point where he is...
  3. SuperHeiyan

    One reason out of the many on why cats are better

    Should be? Cats refuse to be trained. The only easy stuff to train you cat in is where to go in toilet and when food is coming. And it is just heavily tied to their instincts. Cat will not going to be a bro and help you by itself. At best he will cuddle you when he want to cuddle you.
  4. SuperHeiyan

    One reason out of the many on why cats are better

    Cats are creatures that tend to have perversive version of intelligence called cunning. They aren't necessary will become evil arrogant bastards who destroy glass just because being bored but they have that natural tendency. Cats also noticeble hard to train so not many people bother outside...
  5. SuperHeiyan

    Does this system make sense?

    If you go for Laozi approach then https://www.egreenway.com/taoism/ttclz25.htm then something like Mortal: 1-100mu Earthly: 101-1,000mu Heavenly: 1,001-1,000,000mu Immortal: 1,000,001-1,000,000,000mu Cosmic: 1,000,000,001-1,000,000,000,000mu will make more sense. For cultivation stages, if...
  6. SuperHeiyan

    Does this system make sense?

    I don't like the part where you are using "Laws consist of Laws" because metaphysical Law is a governing principle by itself. It can be related to other laws, but making one consist of other seems convoluted because why you even need to separate them in the first place? You can find other...
  7. SuperHeiyan

    Stories that seemed to be Fanfiction, but not "Fanfictions"?

    So still derivation work? Or something that is built on common legend?
  8. SuperHeiyan

    Writing Prompt How to turn a kingdom into a ruin with just 4 of you?

    No matter the class, any will do, that poor bastards don't know horrors of economic warfare. So I just need some starting money and they will bring their own kingdom into ruin.
  9. SuperHeiyan

    Writing Prompt We need more CYOA type prompts

    Thing that many people mistakenly call CYOA this day is merely "character generator". It doesn't have anything after that part. Supplementary material? Fine. I even had some fun with interactive ones on Neocities, but writing book with that CYOA character/world generators where you pick options...
  10. SuperHeiyan

    Recommended Erotica writing Forums/Servers?

    Yeah, Questionable Questing is wholesome. Even when stories involve mind-control harem gathering.
  11. SuperHeiyan

    That time Michael Jackson gets reincarnated as a Demon Lord in Taisho Era Japan and turns into an Anime Girl

    Michel Jackson, despite his attempts (or illiness, accounts vary) to change skin color to white, was born black. Being reincarnated as an asian girl from the image instead seems ironic. But there is just no knowledge of his true character, even people who knew them can't agree on his character...
  12. SuperHeiyan

    Historically/scientifically incorrect reference in a story

    Eh, I separate it into 3 things, historical inaccuracy, scientific inaccuracy and gender-bender. I have rather large tolerance to historical inaccuracy and tend to consider it "what if scenario" and straight up "alt history". The only times when I have an issue is when authors becomes apologist...
  13. SuperHeiyan

    Which cover makes you want more to click on the story?

    I didn't even noticed the wolf on the picture but hooded figure is the most catchy one and associated with more interesting literature works than other options so it's the one that makes me want to click the most.
  14. SuperHeiyan

    Multiple POV's

    I don't know what you mean as a "deep" third person but if you think about something opposite to omniscient perspective (which is close to what I mean as omnipotent due religious connotation but not really the same) then I know it as a limited perspective. I didn't meant "3rd person is someone...
  15. SuperHeiyan

    Multiple POV's

    I disagree. 3rd person supposed to be omnipotent. 1rd person is not, it's more the case of "unrelliable narrator" and this is helpful if you don't wan't to give readers undue hints or want to give them wrong ones. Technically there is no such thing as a "character written in third person"...
  16. SuperHeiyan

    Multiple POV's

    Overlord is really not very fitting example to compare with Martin's books but on other case the purpose of that story is subvert expectation of characters subverting and so it's centred around characters who are evil and will stay evil as well as good heroes turning up as useless. Pretty much...
  17. SuperHeiyan

    Multiple POV's

    You can go multiple povs two ways, they can be either "suplementary" like first person interludes you can see in many books or "parallel" like Martin did. They can be sometimes mixed but they serve different purpose. And I sorry for advance if I use wrong terms here or there since English is...
  18. SuperHeiyan

    I want to stick to the schedule, but I can't.

    Almost everyone face such issue. For example I postponing updating one of my stories (not on this site and not on English) for more than 3 years and not for lack of inspiration since I even already have it on paper and just need to "digitalize". I just... Always keep finding some other things to do.
  19. SuperHeiyan

    Soul Eater fanfic??

    Eh, I read decent amount of Soul Eater fanfics. Many of them involved SI into weapon or taking a place of Soul. But I believe there was a good one about taking place of Kid Death. By most of the ones I read was on Russian.
  20. SuperHeiyan

    How to deal with this monster?

    Wait, uninterupting invsibility and no teleport? Can heroes just mark suspicious direction with paint or something? Also, wizard probably should use area denial and movement restriction abilities on ground. I mean, If it was Pathfinder then the Pit is a way.
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