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Liking a story and offering patronizing suggestions are not the same. And please don't make this an issue about LGBTQ people in general. It's disrespectful to drag a whole community into an issue like this.

Most people have enough empathy to relate to characters so stories with emotional turmoil tend to impart at least some of those feelings to the reader. Generally, these stories have things like a tragedy or psychological tag to warn readers and a quick look at apple grotto nymph does not give...

People who are willing to watch me go through a whole villain arc within the course of 2 hrs and 17 min

Excessive circumcision

I should be more specific in my critique of English seeming to not be your first language. The first is that the tenses seem to occasionally shift between past and present. Always stick to one tense throughout a story, past tense is preferable. The narration just seems stiff and rigid. While the...

Not really a review but after skimming through, it feels like English isn't your first language. Plus the giant spaces between sentences is really visually unappealing. No need to review my stuff. I just pointed out some surface level things that can be improved to guarantee better ratings...

Berserk did it. But requires a high amount of finesse and careful thought. Subtle humor can also be good.

What is with fantasy settings and ethnostates? Are immigration policies so shit that a dude can't get a citizenship for his catgirl wife?

I mean it's really not that egregious of a name. Does come off as unknowledgeable European writer making up chinese names, but not particularly bad. And it's not like Cho explicitly uses chopsticks while eating dogs at hogwarts.

On this site? Or somewhere else? If we're talking about on this site, then genderbender, girls love, harem, and litrpg are the trend with a few occasional anomalies.