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I do practically write only from 1st person, with very little 3rd person visualization of the settings, true. I think this was intentionally done by me to get precisely that school play feeling. Yeah, same for me. I probably watched it when it first aired. Thanks for taking a look at this...

Sure, @ModernGold7ne. Do things at your own pace. I'm also writing for my own interest (and because there were no interesting anime to watch) and my characters are making anime level sense (especially if I read my previous chapter a few days later and see how stupid it actually feels). Work well!?

Chapter 6 The dialogue feels a bit... silly? And they both are unexpectedly trusting of eachother for no reason from the very start.. like two children interacting? Is that your intention? Yup, definitely class/rank/level based discrimination is showing up very soon. The System said that...

Lunch break!! Chapter 3 Ummm... Hyper mature and intelligent 6 year-old kid? Ah, I get it, she is a genius. ""right now I’m cold, I CAN’T SEE and that damned system screwed me over!”" just literally 2-3 sentences prior to this, you had her look around and SEE the bird's corpse, turned puddle...

I almost cringe to death from looking at my work a few weeks ago, and that's already an improvement from just being unable to look at the previous chapter. My first chapters are a dumpster fire. BTW I'm just trying out this whole "writing" thing because I wanted to try it out, I'm NOT a writer...

Break down some of the longer sentences into multiple ones. (Like, the really, really, really, fucking really damn long sentences. The English language doesn't like them that long.) It's hard to notice the switch between 3rd person text and her inner monologue without some '*`’‘. Really, any...

gun-shaped CADs from "The Irregular at Magic High School" because that's something that can be used by the average (magical) Joe! A few impractical aesthetic add-ons and it becomes posing material!

??? What is that? Is it tasty??? Google search... Oh...RIP. That's something parents tell their children about the old days in the Soviet Union. Now... Now you'll be reported to the police for any aggressive behaviour. (If not assaulted by the students themselves) Childish..speaking like a...

Young Mistress! Young Mistress! Can you shine a spotlight on the teachers? How are they like people? (Blank faced placeholders like most anime show them to be?) Can we write about interested normal human teachers without making them supernatural beings and/or a complete piece of shit that was...

Our schools are boring in that regard. Rusty pipes and a barely used faucet? Happens in older buildings all the time. DAMN, I've actually laughed a few times while re-reading this part. Thanks! (As I read it for the fifth time, I decide to include it in my shitty story for the two people who...

Your Excellency! Spare these peasants a second of your time! In Japanese Schools, do students come up with "mysteries" "supernatural phenomenon" "folktales" "stories" that are unique to their own school? (A version of the 8 wonders of the world, but more local and creepy?) Are the people there...

Just to clarify. All of that applies to school vacation too? P.S. AAA aaaaAA!!!! You are BREAKING them! Our rose tinted glasses! Our illusions! God is dead! That would have been the point of me turning around and going to join the gym club.

No mix and match here either. Sometimes there would be "special" one off lessons that would have several different classes joined (History/literature lesson: watching some documentary/classic and writing up some test/impression about it. Something along those lines.) And as a rule we stayed in...

This one shall remember your benevolence, your Highness! You have mentioned - points of contact between students in different classes. Do joint classes happen in Japanese Schools? (Different year students attending the same lesson at once). From personal exp. in school: we've had gym class and...

Immortal sama! Another question, please! Are school clubs a big thing out there? (I don't mean the sports clubs, as they exist in one form or another everywhere). There is plenty of "clubs" depicted in anime and manga, but are they actually common? Are there designated club rooms? Club...

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Are there student councils? Like the ones that actually do things? And what do they do for/together with the students? (I've only come into contact with Student Union at university)

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