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  1. Aiyoki

    Welcome thread for the newbies!

    Not super new but I guess you could say I'm new-ish I like reading (And playing video games) Preferred genre? Hm.... I prefer Fantasy and sci-fi over most other genres And I'm here on SH because this place offered a way to post and share my writings for free, and at least have some level of...
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    Recommendations Looking for manapunk light\webnovels.

    Could just go ahead and read it and not rate it if it doesn't fit the criteria :blob_neutral:
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    Recommendations Looking for manapunk light\webnovels.

    Manapunk huh... I might know some (or one...) but... it's super subtle and not exactly a focus for the story so...
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    Looking for Work Open for commission

    There's a joke? Or a lie? Or something else.... hmmmm.... Maybe I should make a story and title it "Sample" :blob_cookie:
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    Sarcastic description of what happened in your story today. (Mega Thread)

    My MC Ran from a fight while carrying a goblin, was partially involved in causing said goblin to faint, punched a brick wall with her bare fist in the presence of a rescue and medical relief helper, and then proceeded to run back to the fight she'd originally been running away from...
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    What's the time in your story?

    TBH I'm 15 chapters into my story and I haven't established an actual time system yet that the readers can reference. It is different than Earth, however it's not wholly relevant to what's going on in the story right now though so I've only really referenced generalized time of day such as...
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    Looking for Work Open for commission

    I presume the samples are some of your previous work? If so (And assuming you have options for receiving payment besides paypal > I refuse to use paypal due to its insecurities) I would be interested in requesting a cover art commission for my story: Crimson Fields.
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    It's a Character Lineup!

    Added a link to the character creator.
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    It's a Character Lineup!

    Painge showed me this neat little character creator! So I decided to make a lineup of the three main girls from my story :D (Painge created Lyssa, I created the other two.) Lineup shows roughly how each character's height measures up to the others The creator (not sure if it does males... ->...
  10. Aiyoki

    I just began posting my work. I got like 50 new page views this week, but zero reviews. Is this normal?

    I got a review. Sadly the reviewer appears to have that "hatrs gonna hate" kind of vibe and just review bombed my story for the hell of it instead of actually trying to understand/interpret/think about what the story and its context has brought to light.
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    I am bored. So Recommend me a story of a guy who goes between the Minecraft world and here.

    I once thought about writing a minecraft story where it follows Steve and each hostile mob introduces a stereotyped male or female (mostly female) character into the mix. It would be an isekai where RL Steve becomes Minecraft Steve and now has to contend with Minecraft's differing world...
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    Align to page vs Align to left?

    I aligned to left. does it still look that way?
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    Align to page vs Align to left?

    Not sure about that being the professional standard of western fictional literature... Every fictional book I purchased and "physically" own is aligned to page, not to left... But I can see it being the norm for web based articles and books. :blob_teehee:
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    Align to page vs Align to left?

    Hm... I'll have to consider that then. I've read a lot of books and typically that's the alignment format they possess... :blob_neutral:
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    Need some Dragon Ball help

    I don't think I've ever viewed Kami as being omniscient. Sure he's the guardian of earth and has vast knowledge about a lot of things on earth, but he doesn't have eyes everywhere at all times so it's entirely possible there is a ton of stuff he's missed in his time as guardian. Plus the...
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    Align to page vs Align to left?

    So I recently got a comment on the first chapter of my Crimson Fields series and I'm curious about it as the commentor didn't really specify reasoning. It reads as follows: "Always left align, NEVER align the text to extend to the whole line. Please don't leave it like this." The person who...
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    Writing How Many Words Should I Put?

    Chapter plotting is probably more important than overall word count IMO. For my story I started with the thought that 1.5k-2.5k words would be doable since I planned to have 2 chapter releases per week. Buuut I actually had to break up a chapter last week in order to meet my self imposed...
  18. Aiyoki

    Username and Avatar

    Aiyoki: Copyright 2006 by me. I wanted a unique username that still sounded like it could be Japanese. Anyone using this username that isn't me is likely a thief trying to steal my identity (JK) :P The avatar: Tanya Degurechaff. She's psychotic and a bit insane in the membrane. She's also...
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    Writing How do you guys persist on creating another chapter?

    I'm a huge procrastinator and tend to distract myself with video games and anime when I should be doing something I actually need and/or want to do. @_@ I have an end goal for my current story's arcs. Visualizing where the MC will be at the end of it. Other than that I'm trying out the "Keep...
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    I may have some writing advice.

    The idea is to think about and replace as many repetitive nondescript and vague words as possible and try to replace them with more fulfilling descriptive terminology. Sometimes I go through and search a specific word I know I use a lot of in writing just to see how many times I used it...
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