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  1. Rivertalon

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/758941/i-have-been-reincarnated-as-a-goat-/ Please review this book. You can just post on the thread.
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    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

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    Arrogant Young Master's Story Feedback

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    Free feedback thread.

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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

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    Envy's Free Feedback Thread [Thread Closed]

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  7. Rivertalon

    My new Novel, help

    Thx I'll wait for your review. It doesn't matter if it's good or bad.
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    My new Novel, help

    Hello everyone I am new. If you are free please visit my novel and give a review. It doesn't matter if it's good or bad, just be honest. I believe this will help me improve my writing. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/758941/i-have-been-reincarnated-as-a-goat-/
  9. Rivertalon

    Your favorite Litrpg ?

    Your previous answer. I was just hoping some experience readers or author give my book a visit and point out my fault.
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    Your favorite Litrpg ?

    ? Thx for your answer.
  11. Rivertalon

    Your favorite Litrpg ?

    Is there any novel like this?
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    Your favorite Litrpg ?

    As a reader which one would you prefer. 1. Magic Litrpg. 2. Cultivation Litrpg. And also if you have time please give it a visit and help find where I am doing wrong. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/758941/i-have-been-reincarnated-as-a-goat-/
  13. Rivertalon

    Writing How do you guys transition from describing a fight, to showing a conversation between different characters?

    A stretch out his hand and a 5 meter sword appeared in his hand out of nowhere. This sword design is very simple, normal people wouldn't able to tell if it's a supreme treasure or not. B looked at the sword on A's hand in intense gaze. He felt fear just by looking at it. It was also same for...
  14. Rivertalon

    I need help

    I'll look into it thanks
  15. Rivertalon

    I need help

    Can you please check again. Btw thx
  16. Rivertalon

    I need help

    I use qilbot to correct the Grammer. I'll into it.
  17. Rivertalon

    I need help

    Thx I have tried changing them but can't. I'll try again I am trying to fix this for sometime but wasn't able to. It's fine in royal road
  18. Rivertalon

    I need help

    What should I do to make mc look more mature.
  19. Rivertalon

    I need help

    Hello, I am a new writer and publishing a book for some days now. But today I noticed 5 people dropped the book. I Know it's rude to ask. Can anyone please read the book and give a review help me find out what I am doing wrong. Here is the Link thx...
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