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  1. jabathehut

    what if your transpod into a world of magic and no science and you are their creator and you can make more stuff?

    Soon... writing deepest dungeon rn and debating between finally rewriting forgotten quest after chapter ~50 or if I'm going to write a story thats basically hail the king except its return that witch and escape from tarkov
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    what if your transpod into a world of magic and no science and you are their creator and you can make more stuff?

    I wanna write World Keeper but the MC is reincarnated as a member of a pantheon and all of the different gods have to fight and vote over what gets implemented. So the MC has to diplomacy and intrigue his way around the pantheon of gods to progress whatever his goal is, like a motivation like...
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    Power systems

    FQ's/MBs power systems are litrpgs where the litrpg system is a forced form of cultivation so that no one has to breath. The systems are just a processing system for "xp" which is just refined mana. The major drawbacks of the systems are that FQ's allows foreign entities to fuck with your mind...
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    Looking for Work Willing to draw for $60[closed]

    cant you edit your own posts
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    Should I listen to the readers or continue with the story as planned?

    the readers will give you garbage advice, however you can extract useful information from how they react to your story. The only important thing is to find out what parts and why they leave readers unfulfilled. ignore proscriptive advice
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    Join us yorda

    Join us yorda
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    nice profile picture brother

    nice profile picture brother
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    because its funny

    because its funny
  9. jabathehut

    Is monetizing a fanfic wrong?

    No What are you going to do, imply that intellectual "property" exists? I don't even believe in private "property". Next you'll tell me taxes are "real" and there are "consequences" for "evading" them lmao. As long as it doesn't imply that is the original or canon I don't think there is any...
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  11. jabathehut

    I want to be pink

    may your conquest of color go well
  12. jabathehut

    Writing tips- Describing scenery, places, character's appearance, etc

    Describes how it connects to the senses(sight, smell, touch, sound, others) and how the character perceives it
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    i dont read past the first chapter if i dont like the first chapter when im picking up a new story unless its a xianxia
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    yes it is
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    nice Pog DD taking the W
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Gimme https://www.scribblehub.com/series/125302/deepest-dungeon-mark-and-the-lord-of-darkness/ My first two chapters are way too slow, I wanna add an in media res but I want to add an in media res of a scene from like chapter 20-30 and I'm not sure how it will shake out yet.
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    Can you see it? The emoji I mean.

    I can see them
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