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    Feedback thread from me.

    Is this still open? Hope you try mine out. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/864512/planet-breaker/
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Hola, I would like to know how I did well for this one. I tried removing all gamified elements and wanted to stick with the narrative as much as possible. Thanks in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/864512/planet-breaker/
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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Hola, this is my new novel. Thanks in advance... :D https://www.scribblehub.com/series/864512/planet-breaker/
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    I need help with a system!

    It's okay, though you need to expand more on the first-type since the second-type is at a disadvantage because type 1 can see type 2 but not the other way. A work around could be that there is a particular distinction between normal person and transformed supernatural creature (type 1) so that...
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    Lack of Feedback After Thousands of Total Chapter Reads

    Thank you for the feedback. I have stopped publishing more of the story for now and might re-write it on another date. I am currently working on another one instead, but I'll try my best to incorporate your feedback onto my new one as well.
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    Lack of Feedback After Thousands of Total Chapter Reads

    I don't think its harsh though, and you do have a point. I guess starting it out with some easily entertainable stories that fits to the trend is better, before introducing some more serious ones. That would lead me in building up my own fanbase and reputation. Anyway, thanks for the...
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    Lack of Feedback After Thousands of Total Chapter Reads

    I once tried tallying the total reads and those views that were recorded in the list of chapters but they didn't match up. And my views seems rather weird in a way because one chapters has 3 views, then in a later chapter, it goes back to 1, fluctuates back to 3 on the next chapter and the...
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    Lack of Feedback After Thousands of Total Chapter Reads

    Tried that once, ended up with a silent treatment. ? I am so weirded out.
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    Lack of Feedback After Thousands of Total Chapter Reads

    I am confused, for the love of me, that for unknown reason I am unaware of, the people that read my story, particularly the prologue and/or chapter one, seems to be not commenting anything (good or bad, appreciation or criticism) at all. Now that makes me anxious especially after I went ahead...
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    Does SH have rating trolls like RR?

    Same, although I didn't do any social stuff in RR, I was bombarded with 2 0.5 stars ratings. And same stuff happened in SH too (1 star rating).
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    Writing Creating own version of qi cultivation

    Hello, I have a story mixed with both mana and qi essence cultivation. I still haven't explained the qi essence cultivation but I plan to do so in the next chapters. However, I am stuck between sticking to the traditional knowledge of qi cultivation (Taoism, Chinese traditional medicine, etc.)...
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