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So, just for giggles, I took your suggestion an set the series finder to block Isekai stories, and here is the result: https://www.scribblehub.com/series-finder/?sf=1&ge=37&sort=pageviews&order=desc and on page one, 8 of 25 are Isekais. Clearly the tagging system is lacking. (For reference...

Hiyou: goes for a walk outside of town Kiopra: volunteers at a health clinic for the poor Ghyuoui: gambles Gidohn: gets dragged on a date with Piyori Piyori: drags Gidohn on a date, then leaves the bar with some other guy Tyrew: takes naps Yuio: wonders where everybody is and tries to keep...

Oh yeah, and 263 lines of code (to make an animated lunar calendar. not done with that yet either.)

0. Take a long walk. There is almost nothing better for your mind or body. 1. Write whatever occurs to you, even if it's incomplete, not chronological, or even currently part of your plot. Who knows what you'll need later? (Same reason you NEVER erase when doing math. If you think...

don't worry about how you get there. just time skip it and write your ending.

One story with 15226 words in 20 posts. 21 and maybe ~15800 if you count the story teaser (which you should because it is canon).

My suggestion is atleast as much about authors advertising their work as readers searching for works.

I guess my only other question is, does anyone else besides Demon Lord try to get down Heroine A's pants? Do they succeed? Is it rape, date rape, or otherwise nc? Is it by Hero Mark IV? If yes to enough of the above, does she get prego? Are we going to have the back-alley, coat-hanger...

The second fight is maginally better written, so it showcases your errors more cleanly. On the second one, pay better attention to plurals. In several places you use a sigular verb instead of a plural verb. In English writing, many aspects of causality are treated implicitly, eg: should read...

So, first, proofread your introduction and make sure you're using complete sentences. Your grammar and diction are currently so horrid, I wouldn't give your story a second glance. Second, don't just tell me what the protag is going to do. Make your world sound tantalizing and protag's...

Finding the beauty and humor in your darkest moments is an important survival trait, and one that our putative Heroine A is seriously lacking. This should be a point of growth in the story. For us, her audience, humor is an important way for us to talk about horrible, awful things in a...

Write it, and I'll read it :blob_evil_two:

Oh yeah, and also somehow learns that one of her incidental descisions saves a bunch of orphans or something and she starts to see the beauty in life. And some other filler.

So, our story so far: Demon King hijacks the summoning of a saintess for his own nefarious ends. Turns out, our would be saintess is of the homely, girl next door, "let me go slit my wrists in the tub so you can fuck corpse," type, which is why she was up for an isekai summon in the first place...

I'm also assuming Heroine A must be in reasonable possesion of her original mental faculty to consent for the Demon Lord's purposes, and that he can't just pull a "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" and electroshock or lobotomize her into docility. Or does he only discover this after performing...

So, a leash is a good way to keep someone from jumping out a window, just make sure she can't hang herself with it. If the Demon Lord wants this to be consensual and not something RFU, then he'll have to let her go. If you love something, set it free. It if loves you, it will come back. And...

Given the absurd plethora of Isekai stories, I'd find a "Not Isekai" tag a very useful thing.

Fix your tenses, spelling, plurals, and word choices. You don't know how to use superlatives. Go through and reword everthing to use -ing a bare minimum of times; you'll be force to write in a more active voice and pay better attention to causality. Also, minimize your use of infinitives (to...

Hmm... small animal is a good idea. Lends some parellelism. But if she's starting off in the demon lord's clutches, how does she learn she's supposed to be some saintess? And how far down this grimdark rabbit hole do you want to go? And, if the demon lord is abducting her, how far down the...

Huh. It's actually really annoying that reading my own work while I'm signed in counts as a view. If the stats are going to be authentic, what's the point in having them?