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Hello, I have recently been experimenting with a dark-fantasy litrpg and finally finished a decent draft for its first chapter, and I need feedback for it. If you have time to spare, I won't mind constructive or harsh criticism, or just small comments about it.

We need a bit more context, like the summary of the story, its genre, and the current situation for a good answer. Also, a year can be short and long, depending on the story's progression map. The entire MHA happens in one year, while in some media, a year-long time skip happens between almost...

1. Honey-mustard corn chips. 2. Honey cake bars. 3. Olive oil & herb crackers.

This is my experience as a small writer: My first work was getting 200 to 350 views per chapter. At some point, I reached the top 25 in engineering and two other genres I don't remember, and suddenly that 200 became 1k because people looking for that tag saw my story before many others, I had a...

No, unless something interesting happens, like that one guy going all off-meta and performing well, then I watch the clips of it.

I dunno, maybe you can make up something. Like a Yokai that's gimmick is it can only feel envy because something cursed and so it steals memories and emotions of others because, hear me out, it envies them. :blob_okay:

The vampire sneaked inside, quiet as the night, one with the shadows. His target was asleep, the flickering static of his television lighting his face. Saliva gathered in his mouth with each step he took towards his meal. When he reached him, he opened his mouth, his long, sharp fangs shining in...

I am slowly approaching the day I will write my first giant mecha fight scene for my story, and I know that chapter will be glorious.

Drinking game ideas! Easy 1- Go to trending and take a shot for every smut novel Normal 2- Go to RR and take shot for every trending book with Lit-rpg on the title Hard 3- Go to wattpad and take a shot for every toxic-romance novel on the front page

DS3, the game's pacing is fast and smooth, it constantly keeps the tempo up without exhausting you. Albeit, I am very biased towards it since I have over 300+ in just pve, but, you know, nice game, exploration is bland, but I like linear games.

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A quick question here since I didn't want to open a whole threat for it. Which title sounds more interesting to you. Crimson Dawn Rising or The Knight of Hope.

I taste like caffeine, emotional damage, and pistachios.

I used mainly release at 2 in the morning on GMT+3, and at one point saw 1k+ a day despite not trending and having very choppy writing combined with an inconsistent release schedule. Stock like 6-8 chapters and release them at different times and keep a record of the amount of views you get...

50 shades of gray. Like that's it, that book, the ultimate wish fulfillment (and also that one episode of the PPG remake where one of the directors shipped his self-insert with blossom, but I don't want to talk about that, because my day is already bad and I don't want it getting worse.)

Almost there, almost.

Fair enough. Big agree, consistency and Bs can and should co-exist. More stuff that is then. It is tempting, and it's not like a catgirl would be a misfit in my slop.

This has been a question eating my mind as of late. Should we embrace the BS in our books, if there is, or try to fix it? I started asking this while building the world of my current project. It had magic, superpowers, modern technology, knights wearing power armor while wielding magic swords...