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Batch 5. Stopped at Chapter Two—Naked and Bald. Brother, just write a sci-fi, please. Don't choke magic and fantasy out of fantasy genre, please. Just do a normal sci-fi and be happy with yourself. Your writing is alright, but I can't not mention how generic it is. Everything from the type of...

Batch 4. So I stopped at chapter The Name She Doesn’t Use. Can't think of anything to say here. Minor mistakes\typos here and there, but apart from it, nothing else. I can only add this story is not my cup of tea. Finished chapter one and stopped there. I will probably start with writing. I...

You are a nobody.

Batch 3. You should probably stop writing since you can't read. I can only repeat what Macha said. There is one thing I disagree with Macha thought. "Break down each parts to smaller parts with maximum of 10k-15k words." In my opinion you should break chapters to 4k words top. The reason for...

Batch number 2. Absolute midwit writing. First, fix your atrocious formatting. It's not something subjective. It is bad, and you should fix it. Second, it's way to early for you to try and pull off this style. Start with something simple, get experience, learn with your mistakes, study the...

Since cats are all the rage, I'm taking a page out of their book.

huh?

I think there is no other subgenre that is as closely related to the term Cargo cult as dark fantasy. People think that simply killing characters left and right, writing how everything that is female is raped, and every character is jaded asshole will somehow turn into dark fantasy. Authors...

I like dark fantasy. I dislike that every author, there are 3-5 exceptions and I'm not exaggerating here, don't understand what dark fantasy means. Forget surpassing, nowadays I'm not even expecting people will touch the bar Miura has set.

Sorry, I don't speak freedom language, old man.

I have no idea what you are talking about. Fair.

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I really wanted to make it fun, you can see it in my first couple of replies, but honestly, I can't be bothered to do it anymore. SHF is draining the life outta me with how shit it is. So sorry for not upholding this promise guys. I will at least give some feedback on your stories. I will do...

lol

You all are retarded. It's a writing prompt subforum, you have to write a small story or an excerpt from a story, not discuss what OP said.

Same.