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  1. Bartun

    Can You Write Deaths Right?

    No, if my characters don't have quick, violent deaths, then they aren't dying :s_frown:
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    Writing Have you ever felt like your body doesn't want to write even though you still have plenty of ideas?

    Yeah, happens to me all the time.
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    I would recommend my novel, but I'm still trying to remove the cringe :blob_sweat:

    I would recommend my novel, but I'm still trying to remove the cringe :blob_sweat:
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    Who is the character you like the most and who is the character you hate the most in your novel?

    I love them all, but the one I like the most is my MC, Nina. ?
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    Amazing!

    Amazing!
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    Good luck!

    Good luck!
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    [CLOSED] No one wants to review your story? Here I am!

    I've been rewriting my story, and I would love some feedback when you have time. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/283095/nowhere-to-run/
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    Lively Dialogues

    To me, it is very simple. Do not allow the plot to dictate the dialogue. It never feels natural when your characters 'force' the dialogue according to the plot. Sure, all the advice the other gave helps a lot, but it won't matter much if your characters know where the plot is heading. For...
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    Way to go!

    Way to go!
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    My arts

    Nice!
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    Say, how would you write a divine being that is fond of a certain human?

    We like to compare divine beings' hypothetical interactions with humans in the same way a human interacts with a dog or a cat pet. Sure, humans will outlive their pets, but they still love them, and in some cases, treat them as their children. A dog can still bite you, and some people are...
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    Do you listen to voice actors to decide who would be a good fit for your characters?

    No, but I always do their voices with my own. ?
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    Aren't they looking Cute ? - A Couple that are meant for each other ? - Commission Open for this month!

    Too cute, I'd dare to say
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    Favourite Words

    My favorite word in the entire English language. The most beautiful word. Together
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    Artists

    How is it that I never received one of those?
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    Thanks!

    Thanks!
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    Another drawing. Same character. ? [IMG]

    Another drawing. Same character. ?
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    What do you think about Loli?

    Yeah, by definition, they are all 'lolis,' but apparently, the Japanese have a very different definition based on the age of consent in Japanese laws, so 16-year-olds are considered adults.
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    What do you think about Loli?

    Just for your info, this was the original 'Lolita', from the 1962 movie of the same name, which is based on the now infamous book. A teenager who is legally a child, but behaves disturbingly maturely. The definition has changed over the years, and now includes the classical Japanese anime...
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