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I would suggest that there is not problem using it, so long as you use it well. Second, you don't need to use it "outside" of your sentence structure. "...thunderous booms echoed around the..." is onomatopeia. Anytime you use "boom", "clang", even "rattle"- thats always onomatopeia.

After some thought, my answer is actually "yes". My reasoning is that i do not believe that good and bad are forms of currency; that doing one nets you "positive karma points" and doing the other nets you "negative karma points". If such were true, then actions could be mid. Rather, much like...

The problem with basing this on the bible is that the bible was written for humans to read- whether you believe it to be accurate or not. As such, the Bible barely touches angelic themes, such as the fall of satan, what a demon is, what a fallen angel is, what witchcraft is, etc. It just takes...

If I thought the comment I made was accurate and honest, I don't think I would feel that bad. It's tragic, sure, but that's it. If the comment I made was innaccurate and distasteful, then I would definitely feel bad.

If "random" means non-academic, or similar, that would be 3D modelling on blender, and some coding. (technically, coding is academic, but I'm self taught so I'ma count it as that.) And climbing trees and playing computer games.

slightly off-topic, but somewhat relevant comment to this: One thing that irks me is how nobody gets how OP support is. Both in novels and the authors. I don't like worldbuilding where everyone is an idiot that thinks support is useless, since anyone with two brain cells could figure out the...

They are fantasy creatures that are often depicted as universally evil. I merely state that they work better under the depiction that they are universally evil. If you wanted to make them not necessarily evil, which you definely could, you would need to properly plan that out, and failing to do...

Indeed! Personally, I think its better to view piracy as a form of forgery rather than theft.

They wear fancy cloaks, live in castles, and drink blood from wineglasses. They have class. But I'd see them as villians. If you wanted to make non-evil vampires, then you would have to very carefully consider how to make one in order to pull it off well.

If you don't realise what you're reading is bad, yes, because it will build bad habits. However, if you know its bad then I think it makes you aware of those types of errors so you become cautious of those yourself. In other words, if you read something and think its ugly ,whether this be...

Bruh, I waited months for the next stupid chapter to come out- 1/5.

Whenever I see someone with a female pfp, I assume they are a girl. If they don't have a female pfp, I assume they are a guy. However, I might get more accurate results if I were to think the opposite X_X

I first got disturbed at this part. After that, it went downhill really fast.

You mean, you don't all look through your statistics page, note every reader that ever read one of your chapters, follow every single one of them, then spam them with messages on why they aren't reading your latest chapters? Personally, I like to use the statistics page to find out where they...

What happened to everyone living in their parent's basement? Did that go out of fashion?

It doesn't really feel like a book. The reason I say this is that the majority of actions, or anything that isn't dialogue, seems to be done inside asterisks. ( these *). It feels more like it's something that belongs in a visual novel or a game cutscene. If this is due to a conscious choice on...

Ooh! Fancy! I gotta warn you all, mine's a bit of a run-on sentence. It's got far too many commas and makes an entire paragraph by itself. If you don't mind the text wall, this is it:

My update schedule so far is anywhere between 1 week and three months. This means you can spend everyday in tense anticipation of my next chapter, unknowing when, or even if, it will ever come out!

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