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Yeah, it would be quite annoying if it feels like the mc is just a puppet, but I haven't read a story where it was used and the mc didn't free himself after some time. But yes, I would totally agree that it needs to be a temporary state. So you want smut where the mc can't remember it happened...

I think it funny that you are fine with a love interest doing it instead of a villain, even though it's more of a thing villains would do. Well Yandere would do it too, I guess, but you get my point. Would it change your opinion if it is known that the villain has that ability? For me, that...

What is your opinion about mind and memory manipulation?

Quantum entanglement

Because he made a threat one or two weeks ago where he asked for a review swap but only a single guy wanted to do it, and then they read like three chapters before giving each other a review. Maybe I'm wrong and it was someone else but it would explain the V2 Edit: I looked up the review he...

I write the story with the female lead for self-improvement and because it's genuinely enjoyable for me. And I usually write for myself, and I only share my stories because I like discussing them with others. The first story, in particular, is designed for everyone to imagine what they would do...

Well, I don't think a manga would really work, as most fail to display the thought process. And most mangas are just a bit over the top. I think I will go with a novel, and I'm currently looking for an appropriate novel to learn from. Well, technically i just wanted to know if others have the...

Thank you; that is a good advice. Do you have a good recommendation where "typical" girl things are part of or a good romance novel by a female author?

@Seaspecter I never questioned that women are people. But I would argue that due to their different socialization, they do not necessarily have the same values, priorities, or interests as men do. Most differences are quite subtle, but I want to know if you have the same problems as me when...

But my other story has a male mc. Is genderfluidity an option or does the hospital for transitions have something like a flatrate?

Hello, fellow Authors, So, I've jumped into the wild world of writing from a woman's perspective (I'm a dude, by the way). But here's the problem: I keep wondering, "Am I doing it right? Is this how women really think, or am I just fumbling in the dark?" Especially when it comes to diving into...

Okay, I just want to clarify something. For a character to count as disabled, he needs to have a permanent disability. The permanent part is important otherwise, someone with a broken arm or broken legs would count as disabled. So if you cut out a character's tongue and your world hasn't a...

Thanks you for the review. I'm sorry I didn't mention that it's a fanfiction. 1: I frequently make the character and "charakter" error due to being German, where we often use "k" instead of "c." Thank you for pointing it out, I will fix it as soon as possible. 2: Currently, I'm working on...

Can you give my other story also a try?

Can you give my multiverse story a chance? It would be interesting to know where the breaking point is for a regular reader.

Well, I just took a look at your story synopsis and at the chapter names. Apparently you wrote a summary of almost your whole plot instead of a normal synopsis (I might be wrong as I haven't read your story, but you should know it better than me). So if I were to start reading your story, I...

I have two but have never used them in a published book. I hope they count anyway. Conspiracy Theory Cannon: Shoots out holographic projections of outlandish conspiracy theories, temporarily confusing and distracting enemies as they try to make sense of the bizarre information. The...

A good lit rpg story manages to have such a clear system that the reader can think about what he would do in the heroes stead. So if the system just gives random boons or quests its not really good. In most cases it is recommendable to give clear limits for the system that limits the...

1. The numbers have to actually mean something, 2. Consistency, 3. Steady progress (we like it when numbers go brrrŕ) 4. Simple and understandable structure of the system.

Thanks for the feedback. I wrote this story just for my own entertainment and thought that some people might enjoy reading it at least half as much as I enjoy writing it, so I published it. I use this story to improve myself as a writer, so I tried something completely new there (at least for...