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Author here! The African mythology is from the Akan people https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akan_people

Added to reading list :)

I just read it! I thought it was really good. More updates will probably attract more readers over time :) I know you gained one in me ;)

I just read through all of it! I thought it was great :) *Spoilers* The Cavalry being Horse-men rather than men on horses was a fun pun and totally unexpected. I feel like there was definitely a lot of elements being played with but I thought they were handled well. The plague doctor scenario...

Cool! I’m in a similar position as a new author. I’ll read through and let you know what I think! Annoying self-insert for feedback: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/796071/divine-puppets/

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Hello! I’m in a similar position as a new writer on here. I’ll give yours a read and give you my feedback as a reader :) first thoughts, I did kinda skim your blurb- I think the first and last paragraphs are the most important ones, but it’s a good, clear explanation overall! Annoying...

Is this from a story uploaded on here? I think I love the main character already.

No- it’s not that I don’t trust my family or friends to be supportive, more that I want my work to be mine. I know some fabulously good workers/writers but they are not really fiction/fantasy based. It would feel kind of like asking a physics major for help with art homework. I know my work in...

Hello! First time writer here. I was wondering if you could check out my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/796071/divine-puppets/ I think my main issue might be the amount of dialogue right now. I was trying for a decent amount of exposition without info-dumping as a narrator. I also...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/796071/divine-puppets/ Hello! First time writer here. I was wondering if you could check out my story: Divine Puppets I think my main issue might be the amount of dialogue right now. I was trying for a decent amount of exposition without info-dumping as a...

Hello! First time writer here. I was wondering if you could check out my story: Divine Puppets https://www.scribblehub.com/series/796071/divine-puppets/ I think my main issue might be the amount of dialogue right now. I was trying for a decent amount of exposition without info-dumping as a...

Hello! First time writer here. I was wondering if you could check out my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/796071/divine-puppets/ I think my main issue might be the amount of dialogue right now. I was trying for a decent amount of exposition without info-dumping as a narrator. I also...