I’ll check out the updated version soon! Remember, you’re doing well. Everyone starts somewhere and you can only get better from here. You made the first step to publish and ask for advice, which is further than many get. Keep your head up and your writing true to your vision!
This made me feel relieved lol. I’ve been introducing “factions” but they’ve only been maybe 4-6 named characters at most.
I’ve definitely had readers skip chapters with my character side character Magpie in them. Little do they know that’s of the novel. Guess they’ll figure it out eventually lol.
I will definitely keep reading! (Haven’t yet since I’ve been swamped at work, a bit burnt out, and haunting the forums lol) I think knowing how much you have planned helps me have perspective on why you write the way you do. A lot of the novels on here are written less as an e-novel and more as...
“Tom Lehrer was midwife at the birth of modern satire” - basically by default since he inspired that category of musical satire
https://www.economist.com/culture/2023/01/30/tom-lehrer-was-midwife-at-the-birth-of-modern-satire
I would actually say he was good for climate change. Climate change results not just in global warming, but also worse extremes including snow storms. He returned Narnia to its rightful seasons, not just changed it to eternal summer
allow me to clarify: I am a proud writer of the Mediocre, the Incoherent Drawl, the Fantasy of Insignificant and Insufferable Scribbles. Seek not Greatness in my works, only the Pursuit of It.
…I’d like to be a good author but am about average probably. I did not mean to say that I was a good...