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    Any recommendations on a Novel that has godly dialogue skills

    I highly recommend https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prince_of_Nothing and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malazan_Book_of_the_Fallen
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    Need feedback for my book

    Good day. First and foremost, take all of my advice with a grain of salt, in my opinion, you are already a better author than me. With that in mind, here it is: Look at how many "as" you have used. It is perfectly legal and even valid, but if my eyes caught the repetition, others might too...
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    Give me your motivation

    I was told that with practice and dedication, I could become a competent writer. I am striving to work as hard as I can to spit in the face of the person who said these words in the afterlife by showing that I still suck! That and some people gave favorites to my story, some even follow it. It...
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    Should I hide the fact I'm from Royalroad?

    Not to my knowledge. Good luck with your writing, and I hope that you will get tons of readers here.
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    Strangely, hard work does pay off. I've made all possible mistakes while writing my first two stories (overly long chapters, bad grammar, and so on). When my English language improved, I went back and fixed what I could, strangely gaining readers for my main work. Not much, mind you, but with my...
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    Whole lotta covers going on

    The left one looks the best. Something about blue calms my nerves. But if your story is full of action, the right one is the best, it is better to be honest about the contents of the story, and red inspires inner rage, IMO.
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    How to get readers fast

    Action, Army, Cyborg, Dragons, Fantasy, Femaleprotagonist, fighting, military, monsters, mutants, superpowers, weapons and so on. Thanks for the advice! I think I will delete my current work on Wattapad, do some research, and reupload, making the chapters smaller. Since I have no readers out...
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    How to get readers fast

    No one ever checks my novel on Wattapad. Literally, all views (all five of them), on Wattapad are my own. I thought it was impossible, but here we are. While here, people are reading my story. Am I doing something wrong? I actually thought that Wattapad was dead, lol.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I understand the problem. When I only started writing, I assumed that bigger was better. It took me a long time to understand that smaller chapters are more convenient for the reader, and now I am only putting out about 3,000 words max. Sadly, I simply see no way to "cut" or "spread" my earlier...
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    I just finished rewriting a chapter

    Ain't it great to feel that you are getting better now? Don't let the mistake weigh you down, only those who never try anything never make them. Make your mistakes, fix them, and keep growing into a better person.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    According to Word, there are 48 pages. Yes, I can see the problem. It is unfair to abuse your generosity this way, I went overboard. Sorry about this, forget that I asked.
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    English language is my second language, is this Prologue is readable (writing tips)

    Yes, it is very readable. There are some mistakes: I think it should be "I heard thuds in quick succession." I think it would be better as "I trembled as I held onto the fading person.", since the MC knows the character. Overall, not bad. You provided enough information to pique readers...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If my memory serves me correctly, there are 15 331 words. Oh, wait, it is the number from the prologue. In the first chapter, there are around 33 100 words.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If possible, I would like to have your thoughts about my first chapter: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/517935/duty-empty-dreams-and-trying-not-to-become-a-monster/
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    Nationality?

    Russia.
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    What Good Thing Happened Today?

    I found a really great story to read today.
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    My second story actually got 100k views

    Great job! Don't skip on resting though, you better be healthy to continue bringing joy to both yourself and your fans with your writing.
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    Word Count

    Based on your novels, you are doing just fine. Don't worry over the word count, it's how you write that matters, I have 500 000 words on one of my stories and barely anyone likes it because my writing sucks. Don't sweat over a small stuff, keep on writing, keep on self-educating, and you will...
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    Looking for a simple review.... I'll glady review yours too.

    OK, first I have to mention that the English language is not my native language, so maybe I failed to understand something right... Now let us begin. I read up until Chapter 5.1. The positives. You clearly have a clear idea of the story in your mind. We get the chapter with Lucifer in it, and...
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    Looking for a simple review.... I'll glady review yours too.

    No need, my stories suck for now. Give me a couple days to read through the story, and if you would like the review then just review a story of any new author to help them and we are even.
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