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  1. FRWriter

    Help with sentence

    The sentence is totally okay! You really shouldn't overthink these things, and worse, waste your time on them. I'm guessing you could have written at least 500 to 1k words in the time you thought about that sentence. Does it matter if it's acceptable or great? You can't focus on every single...
  2. FRWriter

    New Author

    It's called "Boku" no Pico. Don't cause PTSD to new members. There is a slim majority that he isn't a degen, like most of us are.
  3. FRWriter

    Nice to meet you from Japan

    Welcome to Scribble Hub! If it's a translated story, you'll need special permission, as translations aren't allowed here. If you can prove it's your own story, there are exceptions, so there is a way to publish your story here. @Enkiari will probably help you out. Maybe join the Discord and...
  4. FRWriter

    Envy Guide: Leveling Up Your Slop Tier Writing

    Both of your examples sound like pure AI slop, if I'm totally honest. Totally unfitting for a Webnovel or a modern story that's posted here on SH. This might be something for a more serious high-fantasy story—a story that takes itself too seriously. It's all pointless drivel without a real...
  5. FRWriter

    How many covers has your book had?

    May I ask how much you paid for those covers? I don't want to insult them, but they seem very amateurish to me. Since you are selling your works on Amazon, I think a more modern cover would have done wonders for your story.
  6. FRWriter

    Burnout is funny

    You need to find something to motivate yourself.
  7. FRWriter

    Making my introduction

    Welcome! Though I am personally not interested in BL, there is a lot of Yuri content posted here... so I guess some people might be interested. Good luck with your story. Don't let your MC moke too much, though, or he might get ancer.
  8. FRWriter

    Confused about book cover criteria.

    I think your covers are on the edge and IMO a little too suggestive. However, I agree that we need clear guidelines so we all know what is okay and what isn't. Frankly, I've seen a few covers that went beyond what you posted.
  9. FRWriter

    Writing How to avoid plot armor?

    The question is, do you really want to get rid of plot armor? Sure, MC can fail here or there, but if he dies, 99.9% of readers will be pissed off, and a majority will drop the story. Most readers want to read a simple wish-fulfillment story, and they know and accept that MC most likely will...
  10. FRWriter

    Scions of Ruinforged Age ARTWORKS

    No, no, it isn't the map itself. As I said, it looks great. This is about the CONTENT of the map. The map itself is perfectly fine and looks fine. I just think your world and kingdoms/empire look a little too clean and evenly distributed. Also, just 5 different nations is not a lot and doesn't...
  11. FRWriter

    The Deurtagonist of my story is extremely Overpowered, but suffers from narcolepsy and lets the Protagonist almost die several times

    Sounds like one of those annoying anime concepts, like Sanji getting a life-threatening nose-bleed, Zoro getting lost, and Luffy just being all around stupid. If this is a comedic story, go for it; if you want a serious, grounded story, people will get annoyed and drop it.
  12. FRWriter

    How do you control an overpowered character so they don't break the story?

    I personally hate OP characters. It's the laziest form of writing. It's 100% my personal bias, though. It's already been proven that they can work if progression and more serious topics are not what you are aiming for. Just look at One Punch Man. If your story is about comedy, OP characters...
  13. FRWriter

    writer's block

    I'd like to propose that you never really had writer's block. You haven't quite started to get into writing yet. Writer's block is something if you create hundreds of chapters and struggle to continue, mostly because you are out of ideas. I think you struggle with a lack of general direction...
  14. FRWriter

    Scions of Ruinforged Age ARTWORKS

    I like the art, and I like the banners as well; however, I have to say they are the epitome of genericness. The map itself is perfectly balanced, almost symmetrical. If you create something like that with similarity, unity, and balance in mind, it feels empty and boring. Every continent...
  15. FRWriter

    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    Standalone jokes are cringe ;-) Just my inferior opinion, though. I think the only funny jokes are created by context. If they work on their own, they have been told a thousand times and are probably stolen.
  16. FRWriter

    Will my Fanfic get readers?

    Sorry, man, but this is the worst advice possible! Just going for sex instead of real worldbuilding and innovations is the one thing that instantly ruins your story and turns it into garbage slop. Just my opinion. Most people who enjoy these large series and Psycho-Pass fit the bill IMO, want...
  17. FRWriter

    Hello, we like money (Now taking story commissions)

    I don't think you are wrong for offering your services, just the way you explained them was a little... weird. "Hello, we like money" is the exact quote (replace we with I) that Mr Krabs actually uses in that episode. Sorry for making that joke, but it fit so well. I think it's totally fine to...
  18. FRWriter

    Beta Readers and AI

    I proofread my chapters a few times, but then I just upload them to Patreon. Usually, people point out any mistakes I make, and before I upload my chapters on SH, I have 1-3 things to correct. It's really convenient. Like Dec said, if you put in the effort, there are many people around who...
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