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  1. MintiLime

    Technically, if he gets his power from the Sun, is he uhhh capable of photosynthesis?

    Technically, if he gets his power from the Sun, is he uhhh capable of photosynthesis?
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    Build-a-Harem

    Dear goodness above, what is this prompt. Unfortunately, this also seems like a very good skill tester. I shall be back with a response soon.
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    I am the type of person that makes it possible for Superman to comb his hair to the other side...

    I am the type of person that makes it possible for Superman to comb his hair to the other side and pretend he isn’t Clark Kent, coworker and cubicle inhabitant. I sit here and go, “Understandable, have a nice day”
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    Summoning @Anon2024

    Summoning @Anon2024
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    This is one of the greatest opportunities to get young girls and dads together for an activity...

    This is one of the greatest opportunities to get young girls and dads together for an activity and it’s viewed as a bad thing
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    It’s hilarious because I’d never heard of Warhammer before Henry Cavill (Superman actor) and all...

    It’s hilarious because I’d never heard of Warhammer before Henry Cavill (Superman actor) and all I’ve seen is people happy their hobby got featured
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    Love seeing old men furious over the Taylor Swift + NFL collab. “They’re making a spectacle of...

    Love seeing old men furious over the Taylor Swift + NFL collab. “They’re making a spectacle of it!” Yeah. It’s a game. It’s for entertainment. What do you think the half-time shows are? The Super Bowl commercials?
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    Crying being inherently submissive? That’s crazy. Emotions aren’t weaknesses. In fact, I like...

    Crying being inherently submissive? That’s crazy. Emotions aren’t weaknesses. In fact, I like the “angered and hurt to the point of crying, MC goes on a rampage” trope
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    Please tell me how this excerpt made you feel

    I think a lot of this will be just finding the right audience. I am an Otome reader among other things- And a young-ish adult female is one of those things lol. Readers who like this type of story will be able to easily pick these details up, I think. I’m glad my feedback helped!
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    Please tell me how this excerpt made you feel

    Feels like a seen from Otome. MC seems lonely. There’s an everyday monotony to it, yes, but I can easily see how this could fit into a greater storyline narrative. Establishes clear class boundaries in the tea drinking, but also shows that the MC is approachable and probably rich. Casually...
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    Would this make a great story? Rate it from 1-10 plz

    Otome reader here! Definitely an anti - Marie Antoinette propaganda moment. The writing is definitely flowery (as is mine, so that doesn’t bother me). Overly verbose descriptions set the stage for wanton decadence and narcissism. Plot wise, this seems like a character introduction. Not much...
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    Life's a drag

    I love that plot twist!
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    Sometimes I read internet posts and truly cannot tell whether the people writing them are...

    Sometimes I read internet posts and truly cannot tell whether the people writing them are serious or sarcastic
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    @SailusGebel thank you!

    @SailusGebel thank you!
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    @RepresentingEnvy would you say the writing style is a weakness- like something I should try to...

    @RepresentingEnvy would you say the writing style is a weakness- like something I should try to fix? Or just something that is further limiting audience size?
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    https://youtube.com/shorts/AqtF0BwxbvI?si=I1FCoRNxSpFaTcAe

    https://youtube.com/shorts/AqtF0BwxbvI?si=I1FCoRNxSpFaTcAe
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    @SailusGebel ?

    @SailusGebel ?
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    Life's a drag

    I stare at the reflection in the mirror. Everyday, the face looking back at me seems different. One day, the eyebrows are thick like black censor bars. The next, they seem too thin, penciled lines would look fuller. The jaw too square, the cheeks too round. The metamorphosis yields only more...
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    Thank you! May you get through this as well and may the stars shine colorfully upon you

    Thank you! May you get through this as well and may the stars shine colorfully upon you
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    Many thanks to the best vampire @RepresentingEnvy for her lovely words in the feedback thread!

    Many thanks to the best vampire @RepresentingEnvy for her lovely words in the feedback thread!
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