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Hello to all, I hope that you are doing well. One of the main problems with my writing was glacial pacing and too much showing versus telling, which dragged the plot to a halt. If possible, could you tell me if I have gotten better or worse in this department based on my latest chapter...

Sorry to bother you, but I need your advice on something simple. There is a group whose members cannot express their feelings vocally or through facial expressions. When they talk to outsiders and their statements can be interpreted in both ways (sarcastic or truthful), they add a word after a...

Good day to all, sorry for being a bother, but I need advice. I've been writing for a little while, but readers almost never comment on my story, and I think it's because my work is boring or just bad quality, but I don't know for sure. When I read novels by other writers here, I often see...

I've been using ProWritingAid to edit errors in my work, and recently I've been getting notifications that I often tell more than I show in my work. This happened with my last few chapters, and I am worried about it. If anyone has some free time to spare, is it possible for you to tell me if the...

Sorry to bother you with my selfish request, but I need your advice, if you have time to procrastinate. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1294952/ skip to " And here goes Mungke " How to properly show that the Purebloods distrust Iron Lord and that he cares about his...

Good time of day to you all, and sorry to bother you with my selfish request. I need an honest opinion about my current writing. I am aware that my story is a failure, but I am curious to know if my writing has improved in any way, as I myself am somewhat concerned that I have deteriorated as a...

Sorry to bother you, everyone, but I need advice. Admission: I am a rather dumb person with no talent and am not seeking to make money from my novels. I've been trying to write something good and was doing the regular stuff (reading, writing a set amount of words, reading material on writing...

Sorry to bother you, but I need advice if you have time to burn. I've been writing for a little while, but I'm still suck and can't write a good story to save my life, despite wanting to write. Writing is a hobby for me, but it is irritating for me to not be able to improve. So far I have been...

Sorry to bother you, but I have finished the prologue and can gather that this story of mine won't be very interesting to other people. Nevertheless, I will finish it for the sake of discipline, if nothing else. But I also want to learn from my mistakes and learn how to create something good for...

Phew, after 91 chapters and 352,080 total words so far, I almost have my first amateurishly edited work complete. I had a blast writing it, learned so many new things, understood where I made blatant mistakes in pacing, and (hopefully) gained a proper work ethic. It was fun! But I hate editing...

Sorry to bother you, but I need some help, if you have time to waste. My story is rather bad (one of the worst, actually): https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/ , but I need some guidance on what aspects of my writing (if any) I should work on. I know my writing is bad, but...