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  1. FRWriter

    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    Charles, I think your standard is the standard of normal (classical) fantasy authors. This is a place for webnovels. Nobody, and I stress, nobody writes like that. I've read hundreds of stories, and I haven't seen this type of writing even once. So it might be acceptable in a formal sense in...
  2. FRWriter

    Sorry

    Yeah, most readers don't bother with the Author section ;) This reads a little like Main Character Syndrome.
  3. FRWriter

    As an author, which character would you want to possess if you transmigrated into your fiction?

    Heh, you people are all amateurs... pathetic! I don't even have to ask myself that question because when I started writing, I was such a moronic ? that I self-inserted myself into the story. I didn't think I'd ever have a few people reading my story, so I didn't consider the repercussions.
  4. FRWriter

    My Art

    Honestly, peak character design. Really awesome to look at. The art itself is also quite good-looking.
  5. FRWriter

    Before I dive into editing, I’d really appreciate any feedback on my story.

    Tell us what you plan on revising. Why do you want to revise it? What are you struggling with? This just feels like a "Read my story" post without any real merit. Give us more details so we can answer your questions and maybe address your doubts.
  6. FRWriter

    Can someone review my story (don't hold back)

    Sorry, totally unreadable in my opinion. You need to study basic grammar, maybe download a tool like Grammarly. You comma's are consistently wrong, even in your messages here. You do not leave a blank and write: *WORD , WORD* You need to put your comma directly after the first word. You do not...
  7. FRWriter

    Is it too risky to have a 3.300 words first chapter?

    I don't see the risk. Generally, you want your first chapter to be a bit longer and, as you said, contain a hook to draw in the reader. 3.3k sounds like a perfect length to me; you are doing fine, chill. Do not create dopamine-filled, high-energy junk food because you might attract more readers...
  8. FRWriter

    Reader Poll — Chapter Format

    Why do you create a Reader Poll in the Author section? I don't want to bitch, but there is a Reader section.
  9. FRWriter

    Is it acceptable to shift from third to first person?

    You can do anything, not like there are rules to follow. Though as a reader, I would get annoyed and confused, but if it's just for special chapters and has a clear reason, I'd accept it.
  10. FRWriter

    Let's identify a scammer!

    Just join one and find out. It will be something like this, probably: They mostly try to convince you that you are missing out on so much because you lack an original cover and custom art. Those things would make your story so much more popular, and it's disappointing that you haven't done it...
  11. FRWriter

    Let's identify a scammer!

    "Her" 99.9% a guy, trying to scam you. These fake artists are mostly female because they try to scam mostly men. Never trust a single thing they say it's all lies.
  12. FRWriter

    I have a question regarding AI.

    Yeah, you are right. However, according to OP, he is really at the start of his learning journey. So I think the basic corrections Grammarly offers would be the most useful. No more basic mistakes, no more missing commas, basic stuff. The rest OP has to learn the slow & painful way.
  13. FRWriter

    Let's identify a scammer!

    Thanks, scammer No. 2.
  14. FRWriter

    I have a question regarding AI.

    USE Grammarly, it's a good compromise. Takes way more time, but you'll see your mistakes pointed out one by one, and you'll immediately know when you screwed up.
  15. FRWriter

    Would this kind of story interest you?

    This would be hell to narrate and quickly become boring. I don't think this idea would make for a fun read. Would work for an anime, though.
  16. FRWriter

    Do every novel author react to the accident where he deleted his draft chapter with exact emotion like he launched the nuke to his motherland?

    I download my Google Drive every 2 weeks, so at worst, I lose 10-20 chapters. Still, I can always copy & paste them from my Patreon, so I'm pretty much 100% secure. I would advise backing up your stuff. If you use Google Drive, it might be smart to give backup access to a second account, so...
  17. FRWriter

    'Plan to read' implications

    If you stumble across a story you want to keep track of (not forget about), you put it in that category. That's all. Everyone has their own reasons for putting it in that category.
  18. FRWriter

    Why is no one reading my novel??

    Your first chapters do not have names. Name them. Your work is also created by AI. I can easily recognize that because your single sentence here is quite flawed.... I really don't want to be a grammar ****, but you really need to work on improving your writing. Maybe download Grammarly? Is...
  19. FRWriter

    Looking for a team to make popular story (profit)

    Yeah, you are exactly right. If you sign the WN contract, you can't upload... anywhere. If you do, you won't get paid, and your account and story get axed. WN might even decide to steal/take over your story since you legally sign away all the rights to your story. OP obviously hasn't done any...
  20. FRWriter

    Let's identify a scammer!

    Thanks, scammer.
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