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Certainly a unique style. Overall, every image looks really awesome, though your style is quite soft, not only from the imagery but also from the colors. For a novel cover, you'd probably want something with a little more impact, but I guess it all depends on the requests you've been...

Then I especially recommend them. They are 100% classic with all the common elements and tropes in place. I wouldn't use trash cultivation novels as examples... that will probably ruin your story. Er Gen's novels are the ultimate classics, so they are a textbook example of a hugely popular...

I recommend all the classics by Er Gen. As much as it pains me to say, I haven't seen a Western cultivation novel that can compare.

It should be fine. As long as you clarify this point in your summary, I don't think it will get taken down, but I am not a mod who gets to decide that. :blob_hmm: Anyway, it clearly isn't a clonker, but people are suspicious... a lot of people even communicate through GPT and post 100% GPT...

Is your story a translation or something? Usually, that's the main reason for it not to appear.

This clearly isn't AI. Though it might still go against the rules, as it's solely focused on S/M and sex. Wasn't there a rule that only stories with a certain amount of plot are allowed (like a maximum of half of your chapters are allowed to contain NSFW content? Anyway, as someone who...

Honestly, it pains me to say this, but Big titties always work. Though you also only draw in a certain audience with that method, so you will focus on quantity over quality if you do that. Though many people may come for the titz but stay for the story (if it's good enough)

Man, this is kinda heartbreaking. 0 Readers 56 chapters. What Maki is saying is spot on. I promise you a majority of readers won't bother with your story if there is a huge gap between every paragraph. This is really some helpful feedback! Immediately fix your chapters. You also lose almost 2/3...

:blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl: I can already guess what kind of story it is. :blob_no:

Love the story premise (except the bad luck part...), love all the designs as well. So let me offer the most unhelpful advice I can possibly think of: All are great. I love all of them. They each feel like extremely capable and independent women. I t think all of them come across as capable...

It is... also trying to fit into groups of people who do those things. It's not a good thing, though. If you do not require tea or coffee, it's best you don't start.

Most readers actually only enjoy reading very specific genres. Give me 100 random stories, and I'd probably be only interested in 10 or fewer. If you force me to read a story I'm not even remotely interested in, I'd be tempted to drop it, too. I might be able to provide feedback on some...

Also unhealthier... that's like deciding to smoke because it's cool. Personally, I prefer coffee as well, in its more unhealthy form like Cappuccinos or Latte Macchiatos. Though not Starbucks-level unhealthy with all that garbage syrup. If you live in the US, you should visit Panera Bread and...

I appreciate my own work by smiling at my terrible jokes. Surprisingly, it's a perfect fit... for myself.

I think you're doing a good deed. There are certainly too many authors who don't receive any feedback, so you're helping them out. You are also up front about being harsh and dropping stories early, so I think it's a fun and fair thread. Ready to read more reviews, this is entertaining.

New style is great, but I prefer the older one... it looks sharper. It's hard to explain, but this looks way less detailed.

I get that when I copy from Google Docs sometimes. I use a few websites that automatically get rid of that for me. Try copying and pasting your original chapter into the Quillbot grammar checker, and it should add spacing. I can't properly explain it, but Google Docs does this sometimes...

Your old chapters from your previous story have huge holes after every paragraph. Your new chapters look perfect, though, that's also how I and 99% of all other authors work.

This thread is useful for people who are desperate for input and have received none so far. However, you generally don't want critical people reviewing your story who, by their own admission, have a low attention span and constantly drop stories even after a few paragraphs. The average reader...

Getting Tempokai vibes from this thread... it's essentially the same thing, literally destroying any story. Just with nicer words and a lot of kindness ;-) If you couldn't make it past chapter 1, reading Eldoria's story, you'll probably quit after just a single paragraph from 90% of all...