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  1. FRWriter

    One month in! How am I doing?

    What is your goal? I mean if you want maximum readers you gotta do shoutout & review swaps on RR. If your goal is to create a great story these shallow things don't even matter. I got like 1.7 million views on RR but so what? What does it even matter. As long as you're having fun, get a little...
  2. FRWriter

    Artist needed for novel artwork

    :blob_hmm: New member... talking about random artists on insta. :blob_hmm_two: Sorry for being mistrustful, but can you show us your commissions?
  3. FRWriter

    Sketch dump

    Damn, I'm hyped. If you ever take requests, tell us. :blobtaco:
  4. FRWriter

    Is 9k words too much?

    Why not just split the chapter into two or three?! Culling is the last thing I'd have done. Just the infrastructure of these sites is not suited for longer chapters. Scrolling down for 5 minutes is just clunky, and you also get lost, especially if you just have a few minutes of time. I'd have...
  5. FRWriter

    Sketch dump

    I like gaylolis'... art. Any plans/projects coming up?
  6. FRWriter

    Is my work too crude for an average reader ?

    Probably not crude enough. Readers in general are crude. It doesn't matter all that much, what matters most is the plot.
  7. FRWriter

    My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?

    This might sound really mean, but there is a good reason why, despite the success of Manga, Anime, Games, and frankly, even Visual novels, Light Novels haven't been popularized worldwide. Frankly speaking, the format of light novels has been rejected by the vast majority of people, and only a...
  8. FRWriter

    What do you think of this character introduction?

    Do you like Warhammer? Because there "orks" are also spelled with k. Otherwise, you'd spell them with a c. So he is this noble, typical, extremely well-groomed elf, so far so good, but why is he supposed to be a villain? I don't see it. I mean, yes, he smiles when he sees corpses. He is either...
  9. FRWriter

    My first 3d art creation.

    Too difficult for me to understand.
  10. FRWriter

    Is 9k words too much?

    No... just no. Too long. SH readers mostly have short attention spans, not kidding. A 9k chapter is WAY too long. Reduce it to 3k, and that's still plenty.
  11. FRWriter

    Opinion on my new cover art.

    Honestly, I disagree, but ultimately it's about what c37 wants. I can promise you, though, such a washed-out cover will not successfully pull in a large audience. I even prefer the AI version to the original, but it's just my opinion. I'm curious about how the final version will look in whatever...
  12. FRWriter

    Opinion on my new cover art.

    Already considerably better. @c37 Now do some Black lineart and cover the contours & outlines of the characters, and your cover most likely not only works, but looks awesome. Here is some AI excrement work, just to clarify what I mean.
  13. FRWriter

    Opinion on my new cover art.

    Just a suggestion... a blue person on a blue background and a red person on a red background is exactly why you can't see anything. Why don't you try flipping it around?
  14. FRWriter

    Copyrights: what can't I say?

    You can mention one-off words like Jedi, especially if they are part of a culture. Just look at certain TV series/movies. Popular culture includes certain words invented by popular movies/shows. Nobody will ever claim copyright just for mentioning a certain term. Don't worry about it...
  15. FRWriter

    Opinion on my new cover art.

    You just see something random that's blue & red colored. If you had used black line art, it might have been slightly better.
  16. FRWriter

    Opinion on my new cover art.

    I still can barely see the characters, and that's with the huge version. While I like the cover, it doesn't do you any favors attracting viewers, IMO.
  17. FRWriter

    Tried drawing a Cat for the First time

    While I am shocked and disgusted by the drawing, I have to praise you for you have managed to perfectly capture and portray the evilness and wickedness of cats. Good job for exposing their dark souls.
  18. FRWriter

    Wisdom of the forum, answer my plea, what does a goth-girl produce on a farm?

    Probably coffee beans... the most bitter kind that exists, made for roasting in a hellfire pit. And they'll lose 10 loyalty if you dare to consume it with something as conformist as milk. Black only.
  19. FRWriter

    Story request (Fanfic)

    That's just the thing. I have created hundreds of stories in my head, some with at least 300-500 chapters worth of content. Actually creating the story takes a long time and incredible amounts of effort.
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