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  1. TheKillingAlice

    Doravg's free feedback thread (Closed to catch up with all the requests)

    Sorry, I hope I don't annoy you, I just had to wait for hours for the review to actually show up, so I said thanks beforehand xD Anyway, thanks again, for the trouble you went through, to actually write a review. It made me very happy! :blob_cookie: :blob_gift: :blob_melt: Also, I think it's...
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    Two Week Hiatus: The Crazy Daughter of the Duke's Family

    Uhm, don't know if I should, but don't mind if I do: I thought this was a fitting place for this post, so here it is. My current main novel, "The Crazy Daughter of the Duke's Familiy" (or in short "Crazy Daughter") will be on a two week hiatus, starting this week, in other words, it will be gone...
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    Ugly Characters in Gaming and Fiction

    *Hoyoverse. :blob_cookie: And they are not the only ones. There's, as little story as there even is in a straight line, a lesbian couple in a chinese idle game called Shining Nikki as well. Paper Games (the studio behind the game) also has a huge HQ in China, and nobody stops them.
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    Doravg's free feedback thread (Closed to catch up with all the requests)

    I humbly thank you for your time and effort, that you put into this. ?‍♀️ :blob_gift: :blob_salute: :blob_cookie:
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    First Chapter Analysis

    First of all: Thank you for reading through it, though I knew there wasn't much to take away from the Prologue here. It was indeed meant to not show much, but the bare minimum of what was going through her mind to unveil her mystery, just as much as "Rowena's" (the person she would wake up as in...
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    Writing Prompt Perfect-Shot Villain vs Protagonist... With a twist.

    I'm a bit on the pragmatic side, so it's hard for me to come up with something for an inherently conflicting prompt like this, but that's why I tried to challenge myself in the first place. Because if the guy has ? percent kill ratio and manages to get the shot in as planned, that would mean the...
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    What's your workflow

    What is workflow? Is that when you procrastinate the new chapter until it's late at night and you realize you have to upload the next day, but you haven't even started, so you write the chapter, revise, and upload it in the span of about two hours, somwhere between 1 am and 3 am, when you have...
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    ? Get-Give Prediction for stories :: Prediction tower

    That sounds super interesting, to be honest. But I would wonder: is it just predicting what happens immediately next? For example: I would say I use cliffhangers in a lot of my stories. But predicting what happens next would still be low effort most of the time, if I'm being honest. What about...
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    Why the western works are not so focused on training rhe human body?

    I believe that to be deeply rooted within their mythology and belief system. For example: a lot of western gods are shown living among the people and ruling over them or leading them. In the east, there's an abundance of gods that are indistinguishable from monsters in their stories, they might...
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    Why the western works are not so focused on training rhe human body?

    Yeah, but that's just one example. Almost all the books, movies, or shows I ever considered good showed the protagonist familiarize and train their powers. A difference for why it's not as drawn out most of the time, is usually the run time. Stories in the west tend to be somewhat concise...
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    Why the western works are not so focused on training rhe human body?

    But that's not true? There's a lot of good stories I know that also include training. Of course it depends on the nature of your power. For example in Avatar, as a popular show, they rarely connected blows physically woth their body, the elements did "all the work". Yet they still had to...
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    [Closed] Requesting for Book Cover (A.I. is okay)

    The fuck is up with their hands? :blob_blank: :blob_no:
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Heyho :blob_cookie: Me, on an endless quest of looking for feedback, would like to request an analysis of my first chapter of a relatively not so-new-anymore story. It does have a few readers, which makes me happy, but they mostly read quietly and go about their day. So I can't tell if I'm...
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    AI Pictures of Your Characters

    I mean, that's one way to do it. But I don't really want to put in pictures of real-life people, especially since nobody would be fitting for it. And AI with Text to Image doesn't work the way I wish it would. Btw I find it interesting that you wrote your own screenplay. I don't think...
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    AI Pictures of Your Characters

    I felt that very deeply. But to be honest, same problem on the part that I would like to get an actual artist to draw my characters for me, but I can't afford it. And AI just doesn't quite work for my incompetent ass. On the cover of "The Crazy Daughter of the Duke's Family" sits an AI...
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    Can someone knowledgeable in AO3 give me some advice?

    That's why I said: If you must. Out of the three I mentioned, this was the worst one. It just has a reasonably functioning German version and usership. But when you upload, your region filters you out. Yiu will be less likely to be shown in German recommendation list and such. Same goes for...
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    Can someone knowledgeable in AO3 give me some advice?

    I can see that. I also didn't comment on your grammar, because I don't think that is essentially a problem on Ao3, for the most part. Can repeat myself here: change sites.
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    Can someone knowledgeable in AO3 give me some advice?

    For example, I wrote a story a while ago, parallel to a story a friend of mine wrote. On a different site, our stories did just as well as the other's. But on Ao3 she did extremely well, and I mean her stories became HUGE. Because the fandom I used was in hers as welly, but she did a cross with...
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    Can someone knowledgeable in AO3 give me some advice?

    I thought they speak english just fine thou? I don't think that's the problem. The bulk of my stories is in German as well.
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    Can someone knowledgeable in AO3 give me some advice?

    Because Ao3 doesn't care about original stories. I already mentioned that on another post. The problem is that you will only have a real following when you post a story with a big fandom attached. And I'm talking BIG - like Harry Potter. For German stories, try FanFiktion.de, BookRix.de, and...
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