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I've got a weird question for you: why are you writing? If it's just for fun and you feel like the experience might lose its spark later on, then that's okay. Your goal was to have fun, get the experience, and then move on when you're ready. But if there's something more you're hoping to get...

I'll take a peek, but like @Xcalibur_Xc said: Wrong Room. You'll find authors here, not readers, and readers are gonna be the ones to tell you what you want to know a bit more than us.

Benny, you're alive.

That!

Is this a father-daughter relationship traditional? Reason I ask is because each one looks like a more intimate relationship is going on between the pair.

Does Super Minion count as an enby? It's on Royal Road.

Just my opinion: you could start sentences with what is seen or experienced first, then follow it up with the POV's reaction or response. If shifting the focus to the scene or the sensory experience first can (this doesn't mean it will) pull the reader deeper into the moment, then you can do it...

Totally a Viking, but an aged one. Still got the beard and long hair, and I can lift more than most, but I am totally out of shape (less than I was does not mean weak). Ten years ago, I would've been wearing the arms and armor. Today, I am down for bed. :blob_sleep:

Yeah, I'm in the east. Also, is six-foot-three too short? I was an inch taller years ago. :blob_teehee:

I wish you the best of luck getting over those hurdles. :blob_cookie: Snows often here, but I know that feeling when confronted by the difference of a couple of inches vs. a foot or more. :blob_shock:

I'm okay, but snowed in.

Speaking of links, ask around about efficiently linking your story to your signature. Might help give your content more exposure. :blob_salute:

You're right. I do see where you're coming from, and I agree with most of what you're saying, but there's just one thing I'd like to point out: if we're writing at all, there has to be a reason behind it. I mean, why share something you've written if there's no real purpose or intention behind...

You know, these are some really good tips for writing with an audience in mind. I ain't going to do any "buts" here. Instead, I'm going to point out to another crowd: if someone's writing for themselves, why should they care about what "works best" for readers? :blob_popcorn_two: Quick note...

No. But do be careful about that. Unless you are fucked up in the head, your body will naturally protect itself by gradually resisting this trend; it can lead to cognitive exhaustion. That's sometimes worse than burnout because you feel mentally and physically sick of reading or writing, but...

Rout and route. I keep forgetting which one means which.

You got the message across. Maybe some people will not comprehend what you are referencing, but that's on them. And if they don't know something, they can always look it up. The image you conveyed in that sentence is picture perfect in my mind, so I'd keep it unless you are aiming for clarity...

You reminded me of a conversation I had with ChatGPT a month or so ago.

I would not be surprised if there existed a novel already like that.

@MR.Squabbles I really like the coloration overall, but I'm not completely sold on the shading in a few spots. For example, the eyes seem to have lost their depth; they look a bit... empty? I'd say almost like the irises are purple tack-heads sticking out of black patches on his face. Do you...