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So, I think I need to take a break. Having finished a 280k book. Not sure what I want to do to screw around. I usually do survival games, but maybe I should do something else. Figure I'll leave it up to the wisdom of the crowd.

Thank you. Gonna take a few days off, then Finish Hotrod. Then a few days and finish FTS, book 2. Finally IWS Book 1. Then it'll be readers choice which one I start work on next. (Although I think it would be weird if they picked Hotrod to continue.)

Dude... That test is so political, it isn't funny. It clearly has things that are demonstrably WRONG in the "good" slots.

Your test is broken. I am clearly Robin-Williams/Bacon Not this.

Dude... I DID THAT ALREADY. I have like... 100k sitting in reserve for this mess. This is AFTER I took out about a third. Although, honestly, about half of that will be going into the next book. Recycle, reduce, reuse. But yeah, I bet in total, considering I tossed about... I wanna say 100k. I...

I didn't want to half-ass it, so I really dug deep into the trauma vaults. I REALLY twist the knife at the end there, but hey, if there aren't real risks, then why get invested in the story? Bit of a cliffhanger at the end, I will admit, but I have always planned on Book 2 and you gotta get the...

It's done. Finally. Two Years, four months four days since I started this crazy book. It needs some polish, but I finally said, screw it! And just uploaded all the remaining chapters. The last four, all at once. It's DONE. Hara-Kiri Nonfeasance is DONE. Well... book one of the trilogy. It's...

My first tip is to run it through a spell checker like Grammarly, which is free. Pick one.

He's... what? Like... green eyes and orange hair? Are you going for strawberry blond and therefore irish? Either go flame red and green, or blond and blue eyed. This Blond and Green with red highlights makes him look like he dyed his hair. He doesn't look like a Hero. He looks like a lancer.

Ah. Ya see, I have a personal belief that the point of a LitRPG is the System and how the MC takes advantage of it. If all that happens is he gets bigger numbers and never exploits the system in ways the creators intended, then what's the point? All you are doing is showing off behind the...

Do they have a very complete LitRPG system that is abused and used in very creative ways... or is it a list of stats for a system that we never understand the rules to, except the numbers keep getting bigger and he gets Gatcha coins to give him random silly powers so basically it's just an...

Hey, babe. Do you know what the cloud that makes up my body is made of? *winks with two dozen eyes* "It's boyfriend material."

*runs a comb thru his fog and casually licks back all of his eyebrows* There's an Eldritch... Goddess about?

I suppose I should be more specific. Ryan's weakness is the inability to murder young girls. The first time, 11 of his men died. The second time he spared the life of a young girl, 11 dwarves died and indirectly crippled the logistical output of the entire kingdom so it will be easier for the...

Well... I've written many a character, not to mention ran a 250+ person LARP.

I have Keanu Christ, which is Keanu Reeves combined with Jesus Christ. YES. DEEP FRIED BACON FOR THE WIN.

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Holy crap. You are a special sort of stupid. see this line? THE FACT THE MC DOES NOT KNOW WHO JOHNNY FERNANDEZ IS MEANS THIS CANNOT BE IN MEDIA RES. However... Guy: *leaves his house*, "Sup?" Policeman: *Walks up to MC and they perform an exploding fistbump before slapping each hand against...