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    I can barely open my profile page here due to the amount of videos on the current page. My iPad...

    I can barely open my profile page here due to the amount of videos on the current page. My iPad being 9years old probably doesn’t help…
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    Third and final, outside of a comedy, what is even the point of a fight scene that doesn’t...

    Third and final, outside of a comedy, what is even the point of a fight scene that doesn’t significantly effect any part of your story? There is very little point in my opinion, if we know that after the MC fights, and maybe even kills, minor antagonist #704 nothing will change for the...
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    Second, a fight scene where we know who is going to win is pointless unless it contains some...

    Second, a fight scene where we know who is going to win is pointless unless it contains some form of specific irony and/or tragedy, even then you can only do that so much in a story.
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    Here are a few hot takes, lets start with the colder one. Fight scenes in books/written stories...

    Here are a few hot takes, lets start with the colder one. Fight scenes in books/written stories are usually just nigh meaningless word salad that describes something that might look cool if you were not reading a book. Therefore it is best, even if you can write a good fight scene, to avoid...
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    Popeyes>KFC

    Popeyes>KFC
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    Power scaling is just fanfic.

    Power scaling is just fanfic.
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    Need help again... How to write fights?

    The best advice I can give for fights is to have stakes that are clear and present, have every opponent be threatening to some degree/every opponent has a chance to win, and to allow the protagonist(s) to lose. As for fight choreography, imo, in books/written works it is better to be in a...
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