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  1. Dawnathon

    I need social experiments

    Assign a subject to a fairly long test, at least an hour or more, where they are rewarded for correct answers and harshly scolded/yelled at/possibly even physically hurt like a small shock or loud buzzer, for wrong answers. Except that's just what they're told, while the actual criteria for...
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    Why are writers fighting the future AI?

    Putting all philosophical and spiritual elements about the sanctity of art aside, I just hate seeing AI-generated images and stories. They don't even have to be specifically labeled as AI. My eyes just pick up on all the distorted details of AI images and it creeps me out. The writing also feels...
  3. Dawnathon

    Since we're talking about writing experiences...

    I'm still trying to figure out this webnovel format. It's a lot different from story blogs and forums I used to use. The story I'm posting on SH hasn't gotten any traction, and poking around has me making a few guesses as to why. Nonstandard cover art that isn't appealing, a prologue that asks...
  4. Dawnathon

    How was your first writing experience?

    My first real writing was some fanfic I poured my heart and soul into, not sleeping at night for a few days and only taking brief naps before going back at it. And it sucked, completely awful in every way. Everyone had power levels in the ten-quadrillions, fights lasted for thousands of epochs...
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    Question for non native English Authors, What do you do in this situation?

    I wish Thesaurus.com worked well for me. I'm always stumped on words that it doesn't like to admit they exist. It heavily favors colloquial words and phrases above accurate ones. For example, if you look up "bewitch", you will never get "ensorcell" nor "sorcell" to appear in the list...
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    Well, I might start posting here after all.

    I just needed some website to start posting a story, and SH came up and wasn't RR. I heard RR uses your stories for AI training without a way to opt out. With all the other stuff I've heard about the place, I didn't see any reason to pretend the red flags aren't flapping loud in the wind. I...
  7. Dawnathon

    How did you feel at the end of your first story?

    Way back when I finished my first story, I was happy to move on to the next one. I tend to think of longer, slower plotlines that take a lot of investment to see them through. I also end up thinking of many, many more stories in the middle of writing one. I have enough restraint to not drop...
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    How long should the story and chapters be?

    I just write how much I need to give the necessary information for the chapter. It usually ends up around 2.5k for less dense events, 3.5k for when a lot more is going on. Interludes and some very sharply written chapters can hit 1.5k or under, but those are the exceptions. For webnovels...
  9. Dawnathon

    Show me your retcon skills.

    I had originally wrote a certain character's surname as a reference to some obscure indie game, one that doesn't even have 50 reviews on Steam, because I like small nods like that. Then I realized with how the plot was developing, their family name was going to be plot critical and appear a lot...
  10. Dawnathon

    The Price of Power and those who abuse it

    So you could entrust me with all of the power. Don't worry, I'll put it to good use ♥
  11. Dawnathon

    This thing is AI isn't it?

    Extremely AI like, because I really would like to know how any human would consider this a twist in an isekai. It would be like saying a romance has a twist of two characters falling in love
  12. Dawnathon

    Question for research; role reversal stories

    Could just be because of cultural norms that somehow led to a very powerful, exclusive group of women in charge. There's some historical precedents for it. Probably the most famous would be the "Spartan Heiresses" that at times had more social and financial power than even the kings. For a...
  13. Dawnathon

    Real-Life Horrors

    Some of the scariest real life horrors are the ones that make sense why they happen, while also being things the victim had no control over. One that's always stood out to me was the use of non-functioning anesthesia but fully-functioning paralytics during intensive surgeries. You see...
  14. Dawnathon

    One month in! How am I doing?

    I'd rate it somewhere between a 2 and a 9. Maybe even between a 3 and an 8...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Sure, go ahead. VoraCity It's a writing experiment more than anything else. Content aside, the first chunk of the story goes on for a long time in this weirder subject matter before becoming a very different kind of story. It gatekeeps the people who would like the later character-driven...
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    Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?)

    From one of my not-web-novel works, the most memorable villain is less a direct antagonist, and more a force of nature personified. She drifts in and out of the scope of the story, with enough remnants of her actions being seen throughout the setting. When she is actively antagonizing anyone on...
  17. Dawnathon

    Is 9k words too much?

    There's definitely nothing inherently wrong with it, but you have to look at it from the reader's POV. If there's a 9k word prologue that is anything short of captivating, they might just interpret it as being bad at pacing and click off. They're also going to be a lot more likely to skim...
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    Recommendations Can you recommend one fiction title that sticks out in your mind after reading it many years ago?

    Analogue: A Hate Story Having seen enough love stories, I wondered what a "hate story" would be. I think it did a good job answering that question.
  19. Dawnathon

    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    "When people say they want a relatable protagonist, they really mean they want a resonating protagonist." It's close enough to a quote I heard in an old review. I'd say the simplest step to seeing how to make a more likeable protagonist is to just go back and watch shows or read books with...
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    Writing How to control "deviations" from your overall plot? (without deceiving readers)

    It depends on how far your sex scenes are going. If it's just some kissing and touching with a fade to black, I've even seen PG-13 movies get away with that. If there's anything involving actual depictions of the beast with two backs, I'd say just mark it as containing s*xual content, even if...
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