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  1. L1aei

    Godspeed!

    Godspeed!
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    Okay, right there. You just described it far better for a reader to comprehend what they are supposed to be envisioning in a scene than just... ozone. What you did, that's what I want to see. Build up the hints, let the characters be initially confused, processing the pieces until they treat...
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    followers

    Here or on the main page?
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    What's your opinion on giving constructive feedback for folks who do generate AI slop?

    So... first off, I don't do well in initiating my own little thread; case in point, my last one died like roadkill. But I've been thinking a lot about how everybody feels over the usage of AI here and other writing communities, especially when some authors use it as a crutch rather than a tool...
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    @ekam Just don't forget to focus on entertainment; I get grumpy when bored, like, who doesn't, right? So long as you keep someone like me warm and cozy with what I have been reading, your entertainment, I won't respond... coldly. :blob_okay:
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    Feedback request — Legendary Arthur (livestreaming King Arthur + pop culture chaos)

    Wait... WAIT! Is this the locked Camelot thread I missed out on reborn? :blob_aww:
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    This claim sadly has a margin of truth. Nowadays, emdashes automatically have readers and authors go on alert, stopping their reading, tuning out the context, and them behaving like sentry wardens searching for other signs that may confirm their suspicions in finding things like the industrial...
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    Recommendations Father child adventures

    Just looked that up and I might even read that one sometime here. Thanks for the rec. :blob_cookie:
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    @ekam Yeah, I can tell you are someone prioritizing storytelling entertainment over profit or attention. That's exactly my motivation in wanting to connect with you; to ensure the creative lane you are in is cleared of any artificial pitfalls. :blobthumbsup:
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    Hey there, I now the message I pasted above from you isn't directed towards me, but I felt like I should respond to it. So I really respect you being upfront about that; we already went through more than a handful of bots across the week... month? Anyways, using AI as a refinement tool after...
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    Recommendations Father child adventures

    Ever heard of Lone Wolf and Cub? :blob_hide:
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    @ekam That was not just fair, that was good. I enjoyed the response orchestrated as a surprise entertainment very much; we don't receive a performance like that often. But let me advise you to not push yourself into doing that too often; burnout can happen if you encounter a less savory audience...
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    In historical fantasy novels, which do you think is more important, political conspiracy or magical duels?

    Maybe that's why isekai is popular; easy to introduce the world fluff by having it be discovered firsthand by the protagonist who's just as lost as we all are. :blob_hmm:
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    Thank you for giving me this surprise laugh. I appreciate it. :blob_happy:

    Thank you for giving me this surprise laugh. I appreciate it. :blob_happy:
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    Ideal length for the first book in a new series?

    Not always. I mean... Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone didn't end on a cliffhanger or promised more adventures; that book could've been a standalone.
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    The Word Chain Game (Shiritori)

    Meringué. (So as to not make this complicated, that's an "e".)
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    Ideal length for the first book in a new series?

    I'd say the same unless it was to be marketed; that makes a big difference in sales.
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    Ideal length for the first book in a new series?

    Then, double-yes. Listen to @Envylope .
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    Looking for feedback on AI generated songs

    This is more of a gray area because it is still referencing the characters of their story... I think?
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