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  1. TheKillingAlice

    Managed to reach chapter 10 on here again!

    Did you try contacting Forum Mods or Tony himself via Email? There is one, actually. :blob_blank:
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    Need a feedback on my story

    I do love your Cover. Maybe I would have moved a few things a smidge, but that would be very nitpicky. :blob_cookie: There you go. Some feedback. Jk, but for real: I don't think you can guilt trip people into reading your story. We all feel that way now and then, trust me. But if you like...
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    Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work

    Tomato? :blob_cookie: I actually read not the entire Prologue, but around 1/3 or 1/4 of it. I felt it was indeed written well in certain aspects โ€“ I liked the way you portrayed the emperor, emphasizing and contrasting his thoughts and actions, carving a picture of someone who thinks highly of...
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    Also, because this was still open in a lost tab and I just realized it was moved to Story Feedback, I also saw you made that change. Actually, that change was made before I even posted, but I had the tab open, then went somewhere else and came back to answer without refreshing. The thing is, I...
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    What do you think about my first chapter?

    Bold of you to assume anyone will read a chapter in order to find out if they would want to read it. :blob_cookie: I wouldn't. At least, give me some pointers, like a Synopsis, a Title and a genre to know what I would expect if I were an actual reader.
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    Are there any sort of tropes or generally common story choices that make perfect sense but you just don't like?

    What does one thing have to do with the other tho? The idea of love being something you "choose" is, in essence, you just growing to like someone on a life sharing basis, not actual love. If love is not a feeling, I wouldn't know what is, especially since I personally find it gard to grasp as a...
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    How long will your fiction last?

    Exactly. In one of my hundreds of posts I stated that I self-publish to make things last; to make them official. And to give them a certain visibility. That's basically what I meant. The book will get an ISBN and (at least in my country) two copies, even if it's a mere eBook, will be sent into...
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    Are there any sort of tropes or generally common story choices that make perfect sense but you just don't like?

    But love being a feeling is not a modern notion at all? What did I miss? :blob_cookie: I'm aromantic โ€“ last I checked, I didn't get to just "choose" to fall in love with someone. :blob_hmm_two: I do understand that feeling in certain stories tho. On the other hand, I also roll my eyes at...
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    Thinking about changing my upload time

    I'd second that statement. I always upload at 12 p.m. Central Europe Time, but that's because it's convenient for me, as I still have time to upload last minute chapters or edit something in the draft at the literal eleventh hour, while still not feeling that it's too late and I have many hours...
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    Hmmmmmmm, in that case, I'm not sure what you are trying to achieve. :blob_hmm::blob_hmm_two: I honestly summoned @Eldoria because I was unsure of what to make of your post, but still doesn't feel like a fit for the general chat. Anywhoms, what I said is exactly what I meant: Most of the people...
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    Or good old ones, "Natรผrlich ist auch Harrys Eule Hermine dabei!" - It never gets old. :blob_cookie:
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    Great. :blob_cookie:๐Ÿ‘ Exactly. :blob_cookie: Fresh Dumbledore is definitely king tho.
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    First of all: Congratz! I will then definitely only recognize you, when you keep this profile picture long enough for my brain to get a feel for your name. My recognition engine runs on MS Paint and curdled milk. In case you interpreted as a reference to a bygone era of YouTube, Coldmirror, and...
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    That's oddly specific. :blob_cookie:

    That's oddly specific. :blob_cookie:
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    I got so confused, because you suddenly have a profile picture. I almost didn't recognize you. :blob_cookie: Also: Feedback Section. @Eldoria? :blob_cookie: Also, also: I had three strokes reading this, maybe this was just too much doodle and color for my black soul, but in general, if we...
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    Question about Stats

    I think we should be looking more closely at your Story's presentation. Maybe look at the synopsis together? Or maybe you should post more often? I normally advise people not to overdo it, but if your stats are something you do look into, maybe that will raise your story's visibility. The...
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    Apparently I Have Bad Taste

    The only story I actually wrote down but cared very little about was also the only full novel I ever published through a publishing house. Sure, I didn't try with my newer ones, so I can't technically state they would be rejected, but the story closest to my heart was definitely brushed off back...
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    Been posting for a month, I'll appreciate any feedbackโœŒ๏ธ

    I didn't look at the story yet, because @FrenzyWanderer was so kind in posting a snippet of your chapter, as it seems. First of all: I'd agree with what he said about your writing style. It's important to find variation. :blob_cookie: Going by what was quoted up above: And what he made of it...
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    How to write popsicle sucking scene?

    I wouldn't say I have writing techniques to offer. Sexuality is one of the most "up to taste" topics, right after literal taste, in terms of food. It's like opinions and assholes - everybody's got one. :blob_cookie: So, while realism is of utmost importance when it comes to a lot of things in...
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    I need help... again.

    I'm probably not the best person to ask, I rarely draw, and even less digital. But when I did once draw a person, I used the same method I like using when painting traditionally, which basically means I layer on skintones in darker and lighter shades, sometimes mixing a bit of gray or white into...
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