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Ara ara, Shounen~

https://ellipsus.com/read/4FPpal9Gp84KrQAGBJBIF/Eric-shounen-2 The long awaited sequel ! I took your guyses comments in consideration but don't really know if I did it right? Cut out some unneeded exposition and a few filter-words. @Joyager2 would you like to check it out too? imma slep now

Nice, I got the vibe down at least :blob_joy: I may have shot myself in the foot by only taking a snapshot of a larger chapter. In actuality, this scene is only filler to lure the reader into a sense of normalcy(?) before the main plotline takes over again. Not to say that I shouldn't uphold...

(Oops forgot to mention that this was a snippet in an ongoing story, to add some lore to the side character(Eric).) Did not expect such and in-depth feedback , love it ! :blob_popcorn: Reading the text again with your comments in mind, I have to wonder why I didn't catch those types of...

Did you send feedback? Didn't get to see it. You don’t have to worry about harshness as honesty is more important for me. Can't only have glazed donuts can we? Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read it !

That's the question innit? Anything works haha But to be precise, I would like to know if the scene captivates a typical shounen/action vibe. If the conversations are easy to follow, i.e. whose line it is etc. And if the scenario makes sense so to speak?

Heya ! Thought my ongoing story needed some spice so I ended up writing this one action scene. Would appreciate to know what you guys think about it. (shounen is the bane of my existence) :blob_catflip: There may be some out-of-context exposition, but just ignore it haha...

mmh smut, I dare say my secret account got some views...

Does it work? My tumblr doesn't seem to get that much traction

Nooooo wasn't it just year of the rabbit?!

A cuppa tea. Got some fancy sencha tea from a local teashop

I plan to do an extensive edit pass on the older chapters whenever a new volume is finishes. Reason being is that my writing has actually improven since then haha

A meditation in the thoughts of the protagonist I made (who may and may not be me in disguise)

real haha

Annals of veight. Well, because the first word haha

Don't mind if I do ! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2093782/the-reincarnation-of-esther-nikodemus/

Its an otome isekai where the mc actually kills people (looking at you resetting lady)

Haha, got another bot comment while reading this thread

I've actually never noticed the difference between first person and third person until I started writing. Reading the posts debating which is better and watching writing videos made me feel as if I missed an inside joke or something. First person: when the story is more about the internals of...