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    Sick and tired of shadowy organizations

    One of the audionovels my wife listened to literally had a bad guy group called "Shadowy Organization" or something close to that. Had to laugh every time I heard it. She stopped listening to that one when I was around... :D Ah yeah - it was kind of worse than that, now that I think about it...
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    Give feedback. Pls.(Not valid)

    I don't mind either IF the person using it admits they did so (about half of my covers started as AI creations and then were modified in a paint program) and, if a writer, puts at least something of themself into it - or just admits they edited or collaborated with the software instead of...
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    So Many Chinese Stories Poorly Translated

    Maybe they aren't translated poorly, but written poorly and translated perfectly? I have to think that is the case with some of the audionovels my wife listens to... There is one where the "in that very moment" "just at that second" comments are so plentiful it became a punchline.
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    am i the only one thinking RR ads are kinda flimsy

    I have seen too many other people claiming nearly identical experiences to believe it IS a non-existent problem. Likely not as wide-spread as those who've fallen victim to it want to believe, but a definite real thing, or at least close to what the victims believe to be worrying.
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    Help

    I know someone created a thread in the Illustrator's area that they posted nothing but graphics for their ongoing stories to - that might work if that's the intent here?
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    what is the most absurd tag on SH

    No, that is one of the classic examples. 1. A narrator whose perceptions may be in doubt (H. P. Lovecraft used this a lot, most notably in The Shadow Over Innsmouth) 2. A narrator who just does not take things seriously (Deadpool is the most recent example of this I can think of) 3. A narrator...
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    Oh feedback warriors, grace me with your words

    Good lord.... Passive voice kills this. Perhaps: "It is the dawn of a new era on the world of Radaris. Legends from the past crawl out of the darkness to expose the lies that shaped this world's history. Plots that could sink entire continents form in the shadows. Into this morass comes...
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    what is the most absurd tag on SH

    Unreliable Narrator can be very effective for horror as well (H. P. Lovecraft employed this in a few tales). And I have a story I'm working on (at chapter four and crawling slowly so probably won't surface for a while) where the narrator is very unreliable. I think he's even lied to ME (in a...
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    Writing Do you post your "Prototypes"?

    So far I posted three as "Writing Prompts" in various threads (don't remember if I ever started one) and most of the rest only have two or three chapters - so, unless I do the "Cavalcade of First Chapters" idea that hit me this morning (would create a "book" where each entry was just the first...
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    Scaredy cat asks for feedback

    And Edgar Allen Poe delineated several of them in the poem often used to exemplify onomatopoeia, "The Bells"
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    Music in novels

    Any answer I gave would be a guess at this point - asking them is your best bet.
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    Four Ages

    Rub his belly and find out!
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    Music in novels

    Another thought - if Amazon has the songs available for sale, they might permit use of what radio shows call a "bumper" - a recognizable bit of the song to be embedded, and require the reader to purchase the full version to hear i.
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    Music in novels

    It sounds like you are PROBABLY safe - but I would suggest you contact an actual IP lawyer before updating KDP (and yes, I do mean "selling for profit"). Heck KDP might even have specific rules for external files like that (they seem to have rules for everything else)
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    Beta Readers No Longer Needed

    Willing? Yes. Reliable and able to promise feedback in a timely manner? Probably not (given two of my three attempts as Alpha or Beta readers) but can give it a shot.
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    How "Jump-The-Shark" is this Idea

    I was THERE (along with about a million other viewers) in 1977 when Arthur "Fonzie" Fonzerelli, feeling betrayed by Hollywood and his best friend, Richie Cunningham, literally (ski)jumped the shark. It was a season-ending cliffhanger, inspired by the popularity of Jaws and the show Happy Days...
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    need feedback, "returned to writing after a 2-year stop

    I found that, no matter what I start out with, my writing tends to morph into either horror, fantasy or superheroes at some point. Managed to avoid that, almost (but found out, thanks to Chinese and Korean novels and television that having a lot of money really IS a super power, as Batman...
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    When do you start to get readers

    One of my stories slowly, steadily increased until the holidays hit and I got a part time job, cutting into my writing time. One keeps getting small leaps but never a lot even after I slowed down. The other two are crawling along.
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    need feedback, "returned to writing after a 2-year stop

    I'm halfway through one myself - not for toning it down, just to see if I could. Unless you count someone making an unauthorized audionovel of one of mine, I haven't yet had anything stolen (that I know of) so can't identify with that part.
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