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  1. LilTV1155

    The Second Tempest Contest

    What about Staff, Whip, and Clubs? It still follow the Bow/Gun category. Sound like fantasy magic, but doesn't seem to follow Sci-Fi.
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    How do you think about this character?

    Instead of making the character an office worker, pencil pusher, or a student. I think with his power, he is well suited to be a very Weak & Unfavored prince. Faces threats of assassinations and receive full-time bodyguard services to avoid triggering Power as a Royal Member. Otherwise, the...
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    How do you think about this character?

    Power: Last Man Standing . . . . :blob_hmm_two: ? And the definition is: When Host is near 1% HP, power will automatically lock on and target host's enemies with evil intents. So Type: Automatic, Psychic? and Area/Long Range/Closer Range? :blob_hmm_two:? Kinda generic OP power, I read here...
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    Noble scion names that scream arrogance

    Agree. But passion fruits? That will stink.
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    Noble scion names that scream arrogance

    Name that translates to Your Grandfather's D. It soes sound arrogant and funny if you pk a player with that username. Also depending on culture will rile up enemies and rivals alike because of it.
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    Username and Avatar

    So Darky Cutter?
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    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    That logic makes more sense.
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    I am not good with naming! I need a name!

    Not to wolves, but more fit for fox demons like Kumiho.
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    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Mana Resistance + Training + Anti-Magic Toxic if too much mana and can kill + energy manipulation --- Ain't too sure on bodybuilding though. I havr seen a few isekai manga suggest overusing the Mana to the limit to level up Mana Cap and train body to break limits at same time. Cultivation...
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    What makes you give a story a 5-star rating?

    If that's the case, then rename the shop as Cat Shop / Cat Store, not a business as pet shop. Pet shop always have diversity. If a businessman can't deal with diversity and act with double standards for certain species, then this can come off as speciesism or racism. If you compare the...
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    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Dude! I was almost thinking the same idea as you!
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    I want to draw art for my story

    ???? :blob_hmm::blob_no: Sorry. Never heard of him. What anime / manga / comic / story does this guy show up in?
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    Metalwork Trouble

    What an awesome idea! Thank you for the advice!
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    I want to draw art for my story

    Not you. I was replying to the creator of this thread. The one whose book cover is red background color with just a human head that look like he's yapping.
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    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    I did not stare and glare at Isekai, RPG Videogame, and all that Transmigration Genres for nothing. But the Harem Magnetism Theory is hard to formulate. Should we include a human's soul's purity and intents? True. But can you please explain more about Hard vs. Soft Magic vs. High vs. Low Magic...
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    What makes you give a story a 5-star rating?

    Only if the story's plot and characters really do impress me and only when I get to learn something new about worldbuilding or other cultures I didn't know yet nor understand. If characters are trashy, abusive, TSTL, rapey, toxic, densey, romantically leading others on purposes (even if they...
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    Does the mention of a god or afterlife reduces stakes in a story?(for you)

    Yes. And I have seen Isekai / Reincarnate / Transmigrate / System Hopper Characters does whatever they want after they died for first or so times. It's normal for people to fear the Unknown. But rid of that Uncertainty, Consequences be damned whatever shit things we do for fun or happiness or...
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    Writing Judge my Magic system Idea

    Just think of it this way. High Mana Cap = Users are mortal containers of Mana, they absorb energy and hold it for later uses Mana Resistance = Think of Mana as radioactive energy; Users can hurt because too much Energy or Energy left inside their bodies for too long can become toxic miasma...
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    I want to draw art for my story

    Sorry about that. But it's hard not to comment on that head thing. Also I really like your traditional art style because it looks a little authentic. But the background coloring make me think your book cover's a horror / supernatural genre for some funny reasons. It's hilarious. Why not just...
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