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AI can't give a feedback, the only thing it might help with is grammar

One chapter max. If you care about your readers, most are impatient, even if the character’s real life before being isekai’d is important no one would trust it to matter The focus will be on when the isekai part happens, so why bother Reveal the past slowly

I was confused at the start, btw is this the same one from the inspiration post ,with the neko part

same but I prefer manga more

Berserk

I smoke work both everything take pride in them swim no idk I'm new, and I heard his name a couple of times so ... would be fun so halal feelings if all there is to the mc is a NEET or a salaryman then the mc is the worst , he shouldn't be defined by this bath orochimaro idk it s...

I lack courage and have only one chapter so far, but here you go https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1389794/shadows-of-eaverstead/

Eating is transformation, but not every transformation is eating , my point is , what we judge isn't life , as life is just consuming energy till it can't and dies , like a battery , so plant being alive isn't enough to tie them to evil or good, and transformation isn't enough as even our skin...

i don't think feed is the word here , plants just transform things, that's all they do, the energy required for transformation is released afterwards, it's like saying the light is eaten by a solar panel or wind by a turbine , when that energy of light is just transformed to something else ...

I was in the middle of writing , sorry forgot to switch back

Feelings are far too complex, and romance is just its reflection on water, shaky and distorted.

Romance

Thank you for the feedback and srry for wasting your time.

Football(soccer), i used to watch tennis but not anymore , chess.

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for me jjk >> i hate stories that revolve only around one character.

I have some memories but for the life of me i can't figure out their order

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