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Very good job on the proportions for this one, there is no problem whatsoever ! Your lineart is a bit shaky, but that comes with experience and confidence. I just noticed on the first drawing, the hand position that got people confused is because on your rference the man does the pose with his...

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Pain means bread, hon hon hon

Being french is pain

The first one is more intriguing. It's mysterious : 'Who is this man ? What is his story ?' and let's be honest, it's aesthetically pleasing. The second one just looks like every other webnovel or manhwa on the Internet. Seeing the illustration without the title, it could correspond to Solo...

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Synopsis : herself bloodshed question, she Without an identity, only a name. this new world, making new friends (Comma for better reading experience) (a bit confusing. Maybe try something like : 'Admist all the love, the memories began to resurface. She finds them unpleasant, making the...

You can also keep the current name if you want, but the risk is : your webnovel will perform poorly because people will think it's an MLP fanfic from the title alone. That being said, I'll give it a read and come back

A few names that could work : Aquestea Yquestea Questeola Questany Questopia Those will work better for your concept without any horsy connotation

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First thing first, please number your chapters. I want to know where I stopped reading, and when you have only titles, finding the exact one where I left off is a true pain. So please please please, number your chapters ! You can keep the titles and do something like 'Chapter 1 : Ashley's last...

True that. There exists a lot of reincarnation stories without transmigration ('Become a star', one of my favorite novels, is like that. It's a guy who has over 900 past lives since the beginning of times, and uses those in his acting career), there are also regression stories without...

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I have very few memories of cartoons, I prefered to read books. But I do remember we had VHS of whatever those are called in english : and, of course, the original My Little Pony show from 1983

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That would be fun ! Or the system is an entity like in 'Debut or die' who (big spoiler for those who didn't read the novel)

That's for sure ! In France we have 'Croque McDo' which is an americanised croque-monsieur (McDo is how we say McDonalds, be warned if you got to France), but also burgers that use french cheese like emmental or comté, 'Mc Baguette' which is a longer burger with a somewhat baguette-like bread...