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when i first started writing stories, i literally googled synonyms of every word and tried to find obscure words that means the same thing because i thought using such words would be more impressive. I didn't rewrite my first story, but when I reread it later down the road i realized that it...

Ah alright I see, thanks!

Cassandra but she decides to pull a 1000iq move and start a political revolution so that everyone will believe her words about how the world they live in is simply the imagination of an author who wants to make them suffer...

I'm surprised BL is at 1% lmao how

What i mean is that when u hover your cursor over a certain country eg usa this will happen but for singapore it doesn't because it's too tiny so maybe a zoom-in function can be implemented?

Hi! Since I'm new here I don't know much, but from what I gather the stats page was recently updated or something to let you see a world map (kinda like wattpad)? It's cool, but a certain country isn't being highlighted by my cursor no matter how many times i hover over it I'm very sure it's...

That middle ground can be very hard to find tho..

ooh, thanks for resurrecting this thread! i wanted to post here sooner but i thought this thread had died alr. please do enlighten me with your prediction, here's my sacrifice~ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/354995/our-crusade-on-this-clusterfck-of-a-world-begins/

First impression is that it's a pretty confusing synopsis. What is your MC's name? And it's too vague, if you give such a general description I have no idea what your story is even about. Romance? Cultivation (i'm assuming it's this one)? well, just my opinion. i'm also new here lol, cheers!

as "unrealistic" as someone IRL can be, i'm sure someone like that truly exists (devil's proof logic?) tho if u ask me, i'd say mark zuckerburg lol

wanted to use these sketches for worldbuilding but didn't end up using them, so just putting them here for fun i guess~ really sucks that i don't have a stylus to draw on my phone

I remember when i first started here and posted a thread looking for advice, someone suggested me to pick quantity over quality lmao. im guessing it's cos the more series you write the better you are perceived to be well never mind about that, i cant even manage one out of the two T_T

Fair point, honestly now that I look at my story I could have just combined the prologue and first 2 chapters into a "first chapter" and scrap the prologue idea altogether. I guess I overlooked the "hook" part because I was under the initial impression that it would be like watching anime where...

Ohh, yea I see what you mean now. I wanted to paint a comparison between how the MC initially acted when he come to the world (not caring about the new world, uninterested in anyone but himself cos his personality was like that before reincarnating) and then start accepting and changing...

Damn. To think i wrote a 40k story in six months and was so sad to see it flop down into the abyss because of the unreasonable time i spent... I see, i tend to focus more on characters than the scenery because i want to leave it to the imagination of the reader but that isn't going too well...

Well, just look at how Redo of Healer fared at the beginning (the author himself said it was a gamble)

My intention for the prologue to focus more on how the MC found himself in the environment because I wanted to get the reincarnation part to the reader as quickly as possible, but I see your point too. How can I improve on balancing description with the opening dialogues? can't disagree with...

So I planned out the first arc of my story, feeling confident that I can at least write 10 chapters worth before proceeding with the rest of the storyline. But after writing about halfway through, I was shocked to see that my word count is so pathetic (6632 words to be exact). The feedback I...

You know, now that you mention it, most of the isekais I read with the harem tag have many readers complaining that they aren't really harems because the MC doesnt choose anyone or alr chose a certain girl early on. I don't really want to deal with that kind of nitpicking lol I'll add that to...

Ah, thanks for pointing it out! I'm writing this on my laptop using google docs using double line spacing, so I think that may have something to do with the white space. I read a lot of feedback on this forum about not focusing too much on worldbuilding since readers generally don't care about...