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I wonder what the texture of them is like. If it isn't that different, I could probably gaslight...
I wonder what the texture of them is like. If it isn't that different, I could probably gaslight myself into eating them- Wamba2K
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Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?
Out of curiosity, what is the context of the entire fight?- Wamba2K
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Time just skipped forward an hour and I should probably go to bed...
Time just skipped forward an hour and I should probably go to bed...- Wamba2K
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Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?
In my opinion, it feels flat. I have trouble keeping up with who's perspective the scene is supposed to be following, but that may be because its snipped out of a larger section. Beyond that: It feels unnecessarily explanatory. I think the sound effects are reductive (though that's a stylistic...- Wamba2K
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How to move forward?
Keep writing. Don't worry too much about the numbers, especially with how fresh your story is. Like Julia Darkcrest said, you're doing pretty good, focus on that.- Wamba2K
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I feel like this would guarantee a raid.
I feel like this would guarantee a raid.- Wamba2K
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