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    I don't know if I should feel welcomed or call a certain hotline.

    I don't know if I should feel welcomed or call a certain hotline.
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    Pacing Issues with my 2nd Arc

    Well, let's think about it this way: Do the chapters repeat the same thought without any new development? Is Herald actively navigating with the conflict, or just walking in circles inside his head? Does each chapter add a new fresh coat of paint? - (new info/lore drop, emotion, decision, etc)...
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    Incorrect. Permanent reservation for myself only.

    Incorrect. Permanent reservation for myself only.
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    How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description?

    Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder if this is meant to be more introspective and emotional? Or a bit self aware with dark undertones? Def-eez could some tightening, I agree with the person...
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    Shower Thought #1 - Who am I? and Who are you?

    Shower Thought #1 - Who am I? and Who are you?
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