i end up thinking about how much i would love the story if that small thing didn’t happen. I go back and read it thinkinng I was just in a weird mood I was in at the time yet it just brings the feelings back and I stop.
I hate it when I read a sound and solid story that checks the broad boxes of what I like and by all means should like but I get turned off by the smallest and stupidest things that really shouldn’t make me stop reading.