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    Writing Prompt Survival Skills in these Worlds

    If the System give you a task regarding that, then there's a few ways to tweak it. But the results might be ore troublesome instead.. 1. Masked Superhero disguise -Rescued victims wil go train-rank up to A -S and start hunting you to get apprenticeship out of eternal gratitude; +25% Yandere...
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    Okay. Thank you very much!
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    Then what if the MC is still conscious while his body is stuck in deactivated mode the entire time? For some reasons, his introduction story always get stuck in a blind man's perspective in the beginning.
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    So no 1st pov during that phase?
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    Harem life is expensive. Imagine getting normal life bills × n of wives + n of kids. If you try...

    Harem life is expensive. Imagine getting normal life bills × n of wives + n of kids. If you try too hard for harem, then you better pay all the good child support year round. Or infertility potion would be the better option compared to family culling for a succesor heir to your bloodlines and...
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    Best name for the vile and disturbing place?

    To check your list Is a Building / Area (Location) 2-3 Abbreviations in Names Names invoke fear and disgust (Optional) Names related to raw materials before processing Looking deep into locations, reveals inhumanity 1st Location Known for food production and waste disposal 2nd Location...
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    Objectify yourself

    :unsure::blob_hmm::blob_hmm_two::coffee::blob_cookie:
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    Been trying really hard on that. It's just.... me having a hard time trying to put it into words. But somehow drawings are the opposite, with just weaker impact?
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    Thanks for the feedback and criticism. That paragraph (heart stuffs) give me some issues because I am trying to write from a character's perspective. MC is in deactivated mode. He is trapped inside vat of sustainable fluid. He can't see or move, but can sense/feel "see" the aura / lifeline of...
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    Sentences/Paragraphs Test and Edit

    @whitesculptor , @HappyVainGlory , How about this paragraph? . Thump, thump "Xhein." In Old Kryptoms, "xhein" meant two. The heartbeats and murmurs echoed through the grim darkness like a haunting melody of dissonant chords and restless statics. Those fleshy noisemakers were the hearts of my...
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    Personal Drawing (Storyboard Actually [Probably?] )

    There were 2 war parties. Even if they were not involved, those who flee the battle. They will be hunted by warrior hunters even if they are women, children and elderly. Blood must be spilled.
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    Personal Drawing (Storyboard Actually [Probably?] )

    This is a riddle related to the identity of Grass Boy.
  13. LilTV1155

    Writing Prompt Survival Skills in these Worlds

    Just a question. If by chances, random people like seven sexy cute girls or guys suddenly got interested in you. They are stalking you through the information guild, merchant guild, shadow guild, then how are you going to shake them off? On a side note, when you get bandits about to kill a...
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    Writing Prompt Survival Skills in these Worlds

    Are you sure you chose the Wetland Biome, not the Forest? Your idea of a log cabin in a Wetland is . . . nice. But you might want to ask Google if that thing can be made possible. Since the System is pretty bad. Appraisal doesn't work for Poison Testing. It only tell you the names and quality...
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    Writing Prompt Survival Skills in these Worlds

    Hello, here's a prompt for yall. Say, yer got dumped into a strange world belonging to mostly this genre - Action-Survival mixed with other subgenres: Horror Zones : Eldritch, Netherworld, Ghost Realms, Hell, Killer/Bully Deres, Setting with Serial Killers Isekai Fantasy : Tundra, Forest...
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    Personal Drawing (Storyboard Actually [Probably?] )

    Sea urchin's understandable given the lumpy looks. But I think a starfish swimming around like would be hard to imagine, but not creepier than a starfish with human teeth. Imagine a squid without that delicious body, but the chewy arms and eyes. . Skewered whole ikaykai, I really wanna try...
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    Personal Drawing (Storyboard Actually [Probably?] )

    In nuetral mode, spaceship look like a cylindrical rod. But when it need to fly up or dive, 6 wings are opened for steering control. Starfox Style - Barrel Roll. (Still does not understand how spaceship can still survive crashing into motherboard though, in Starfox Game) In Moving/Swim/Flight...
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    Personal Drawing (Storyboard Actually [Probably?] )

    Hunt a deer. Grill some berries and meat for dinner. Sleep in a treehouse or the tree's hollow like squirrels and chipmunks or birds. On bed of leaves and grasses and blanket of animal furs. (**Doing some researches for makeshift survival shelter in a tree around trunk or upper levels, but very...
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