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  1. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    How to address different skin tones when writting

    As a latin brown, I don't really see an issue with this, BUT: You say you don't want to sound racist, yet use terms that were coined by the white empires of old to decribed the mixed races like Mullato, which is a way to call a person a mule (mix of donkey and horse). This term was used to...
  2. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Media in a fantasy

    It would depend on the level of magic, naturally. Technology would go that way, replacing electricity and complex things with enchantments and the like. You may even have a magic telegram for communicating through long distances. The usage of birds to deliver letters, but these special birds...
  3. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    I need unpleasant stories or experiences that a girl can do to a man.

    ???? Think of anything a man can do to a woman and you'll have 'what a woman can do to a man'. The treatment is not better based on gender, women are as much of a piece of shit as men are. Write what you fear of men, done by a woman. Whenever you falter, switch genders. Manipulation...
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    Writing Your expectations from a doom-esque story

    Well... first we need to examine what "DOOM" truly is about, right? This way, we can think of a good foundation. DOOM means two things: VIOLENCE and INSANITY. In any doom-esque fiction HELL would be the go-to environment. Unhinged brutality, unrestrained annihilation, absolute power fantasy...
  5. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Write whatever here except you don’t use English

    Ese es el last boss del chileno jeje. Hay hartos hispano-hablantes en este sitio... me gusta!
  6. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Write whatever here except you don’t use English

    y q pa' koshinoh qlos? me loh kogoteo a too tan vio zyyy!! su trapo tajao y me viro a cana altoke y kpz
  7. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    What do Unique Skills mean to you?

    Imma need a replay here... A Unique Skill is a one-of-a-kind skill... not a variation of another. Like being the only being in existance that can destroy a soul in any capacity, that would make it unique. You can even look at Japanese Manga in those silly survival scenarios where every single...
  8. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Using "." or [ ] in dialogues?

    As long as you explain that to the readers at the very beginning of the novel, I see no problem. For example, in Castillian Spanish, especially in Latin America, we use this: -You may remove the gloves!- she screamed. If I were to use that in my own novel, it'd cause confusion because it's...
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    Guild Structures in Fantasy

    Yes, they would form. How long would they last? A single system of organization doesn't last forever. Especially with exponential individual power. I refer to them as walking nukes as a means of last resource, not actually having the power of a literal nuke, my bad there. Using nukes in zombie...
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    Guild Structures in Fantasy

    What do elderly have to do with adventuring people and their organizations? And why do they require an elevated status that prevents it from working? Society works the way it does in our world because everyone has the same relative capabilities. If people are walking nukes, things change. You...
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    Guild Structures in Fantasy

    I completely agree with Shadiversity. Another addition that I hope helps you consider a few things: In the fiction I'm currently writing, 'adventurers' are something completely different, and the presence of high level individuals change how the whole thing operates. There is no 'adventurer's...
  12. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Guild Structures in Fantasy

    I think first you need to think why your world would need an adventurer's guild. The level of society/cultural level also depends on it. Take The Witcher, for example. People either love or hate them. They deal with pests, rescue, settlement threats, and even political warfare. They have very...
  13. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    GOOGLE DOC SUCKS

    Werdsmith, an app. Also, you have an ipad but cant pump money for word? Word is the best there is for writing, periodt. For pc, i used apache office
  14. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Fate Series and such

    You want MORE?!
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    Writing Need tips and source material for writing third person

    It depends on what kind of third person you're going for. You have the omniscient narrator, in which the reader is privvy to everyone's thoughts, backstories, actions etc. Changes in scene are not necessarily dependant on the protagonist. For example you have the MC going away on an adventure...
  16. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Naming Request for this monster species

    Character Name: Jote or Xotlapech (Means vulture). Jote is pronounced like you say Don Quijote. Monster name: Chetu'mare. In Chilean Castillian Spanish, you can say 'conchetumare' when something scares the shit out of you, mind you it's a swear word. Like Kangaroos were named, this particular...
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    What the hell is litRPG?

    That's the definition for the term, nothing to do with 'fandom'. Like Memento Mori, Ubi sunt, coming of age, survival, etc are literary topics within fiction, not something a fandom came up with. Tsundere is a character archetype, not a fandom term. If you don't understand these definitions...
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    What the hell is litRPG?

    Shameless answer for lazy question From Wikipedia: LitRPG: LitRPG, short for Literary Role Playing Game, is a literary genre combining the conventions of computer RPGs with science-fiction and fantasy novels. The term is a neologism introduced in 2013. The proponents of the term state that in...
  19. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    What kind of origin could these swords possibly have?

    So the same concept but different names... Gotchu: So you have [Insert 'creanonist theory linked to soulmates and the human shape' here that every religion has] Then you have [Insert deity in charge of construction/forging/metallurgy here] who forged the weapons. Then they asked [Mortal hero...
  20. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    What kind of origin could these swords possibly have?

    I mean, I'm just trying to help a bro with a setting, not starting a conversation about the true moral compass of a god from a dead religion of a long gone civilization... If people want to make Hades a bad guy, they can as much as ppl make our own version of Gods. I mean, if you want accurate...
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