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Yeah, ch 2 feels unfinished imo, the prologue sets up the main conflict, CH 1 gets the reader acquainted with Lenn’s inner and outer world, CH 2 sets the immediate risks, and CH 3 is to be Lenn addressing the immediate risk of visiting the resonance well. However CH 2 lacks the grounding of the...

@Alski often I miss obvious grammatical mistakes and cannot find them on reread. Although I preferred using Grammarly before it used an LLM, perhaps I should find an alternative…

Yeah, what do you think about that scene currently. I have aded something’s included as mentioned earlier.

Trust your judgment over its judgment and don’t allow it to make changes by itself. At least that is what I do.

Correct me if you think I am wrong, of course. Often we need two, or more, pairs of eyes to find the best way forward.

I was thinking of reworking the walk to school scene, currently though I think the story is too focused on the grandfather and not enough on Lenn. I worry a flashback would worsen that issue, if I were to do that I would have to do something similar to how Lenn calmed himself down later in that...

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