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  1. Theresaisnotmenhera

    WONK. WONK WONK?

    I think that's fine, but if there is one part where I would nitpick, it is the dialogue tag, wonked, which I feel is redundant at best and might be better replaced with an action tag. Sort of like including 'she said angrily' in a dialogue that a reader can tell is angry.
  2. Theresaisnotmenhera

    Writing Advice

    I dislike the advice, "Show, and don't tell." I feel the advice has exacerbated a worse symptom, that is, our narrative expression has been hijacked by cinema. Because cinema—by which I mean any visual narrative—is the dominant cultural mode of storytelling, authors inadvertently imagine story...
  3. Theresaisnotmenhera

    I am doing fine! How about you? Edit: oof, I forget that howdy is just a standard greeting phrase.

    I am doing fine! How about you? Edit: oof, I forget that howdy is just a standard greeting phrase.
  4. Theresaisnotmenhera

    Happy napping!

    Happy napping!
  5. Theresaisnotmenhera

    Hi! Sorry, um will it be possible to rename this account? I seem to have made an embarrassing...

    Hi! Sorry, um will it be possible to rename this account? I seem to have made an embarrassing spelling mistake—it should be 'menhera' instead of 'menhara,' which I used. I can't do it from the account settings due to the cooldown. Thanks!
  6. Theresaisnotmenhera

    Hi!

    Hi!
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