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Well really thanks for feedback, I jus forgot this website has its own forum lmao. You are pretty right about the too much description maybe I should make it less and more forward. And because the concept of the story itself didn't fit to anyone I kinda get it. And thanks for it, I kinda get...

I mean ... no not yet, the most dangerous enemy the mc will face is the "Horros" outsiders of the world. And I don't think I'm planning to make them humans ... Or should I? Thinking it again, maybe after some long run it will be a good plot.

Noted, cause Thare's still so much Point I need to explore at the same time, I must be very careful not leaving any important plot behind. Part of it because I choose to take everything slow. So I have to do it to with the most potential I could take.

Because it's not, and it's never will be. This story is not for all type of person because like you said, many of things doesn't even feels like need to happened. Actually, Thare's not any story in it yet, I don't explain anything everything just .. going straight. Not even once the story...

O!! Please do me! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2277061/after-returning-from-another-world-my-sister-became-obsessed-with-me-rework/

I can't stop because ... I will be there for everyone ... as we head toward our shared future, leaving the past behind.

Didn't expect someone would call me that tittle too in here lmao😔☝️

I can't serve to people what I think it's bad, and I can't think what I made is good or bad, unless there's someone want to taste it first and tell me their opinion

Could you also do mine please? It's an early story (10 chapter) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2277061/after-returning-from-another-world-my-sister-became-obsessed-with-me-rework/

I don't know if you would read an early that starts the begining of story or not. But If you do, could you also do my story : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2277061/after-returning-from-another-world-my-sister-became-obsessed-with-me-rework/

It is, I guess you are right, i'm at the point of asking myself "Did I do everything right?" Thanks so much for this feedback, you know ... I already see this forum was supportive at each other. But beeing the one that receiving feedback, I feel like the positives energy really give much...

I see I didn't point out about which aspect yet. What I needed is the most weakest point about the plot, the pacing I'm building and how the characters are. (Already edit the threat) Thanks, actually it's my second time posting about this in here, sorry for the inconveniences (2)

Here, I’d like to ask for help reviewing the early version of this story while it’s still in its beginning stages. I want to make this second work of mine better than my previous one. So, if anyone has the time, I’d really appreciate it if you could read the opening scenes. For now, there are...

Title: What? My “Information Club” is Actually an All-Knowing Secret Society? So basically, the MC only wanted to make his novel go viral by running an ARG (Alternate Reality Game). Next thing he knows, the people joining the ARG roleplay are absolute maniacs and hardcore fanatics 😫 And it...

I think, the best way is just to read more. Like anyone said, the more you know something (in this case, the more you know how the story goes, how the conflicts going up and down, and how building a character connection) the more likely you improve yourself